VIP Class Notes (Nicholas)[W/S]

Do you have a healthy lifestyle?

Finishing correcting speaking story.

Original

I would like to reading, travelling, watching movies in my free time. I bought many kinds of novels in my bedroom, such as mystery stories, historical stories and some books about examination. I used to borrow romance novels from a boy who was sitting behind me when I was a high school student. I was attractive with the love story of hero and heroine. I used to go to Japan during my holiday. It is a beautiful country but its prices are higher than ours.If I have enough money and holidays, I want to go to more and more cities in China with my best friends where I’ve never reached/been. I can travel around our country to know some difference cultures and traditional foods from there. That’s a wonderful dream what I want to realize.

Corrected 

I like to read, travel, and watch movies in my free time. I have many different kinds of novels in my bedroom such as mystery stories, historical stories, and some exam / examination books. I used to borrow romance novels from a boy who was sitting behind me when I was a high school student. I was attracted to love stories about heroes and heroines. I used to go to Japan during my holidays. It is a beautiful country but its prices are higher than ours.If I have enough money and time / vacation days, I want to go to more and more cities in China with my best friends where I’ve never been. I can travel around our country to know some different cultures and traditional foods. That’s a wonderful dream that / which I want to realize.

Vocabulary

attract = verb
attraction = noun
attractive = adj

Boys are attracted to girls.
He is an attractive boy.
Sugar attracts bees.

introverted – 内向
extroverted – 外向

in charge of the radio room

did it bring back old feelings
did old feelings return
did you feel old feelings again

10th grade / grade 10

university
high school = grades 9 – 12
middle school = grades 6-8
primary school / elementary school = grades 1-5

encounter – 遇到
I encountered Fiona in the classroom.
In the dark cave, I encountered a scary animal.

they had different point / mind / points of view / mentalities 

mentality – 心态

communication / communicate – 交往
He wanted to communicate with me.
He wanted communication with me.
We started communicated with each other.
It’s important for husbands and wives to have strong communication.

french fries – 薯 条
I could eat the french fries for free.

Original

She was a head director with my class, when I was a high school student I don’t like to have conversation with other people / I was shy / introverted. I always introverted when I was a teenager. I have a little friends, I have boyfriends much more than girls. I think talking with / to boys easier than girls. My teacher introduce me to a teacher who is in charge of the radio room, I must read many messages to some students department everyday. And I become extroverted. She changed my personality / mind / outlook / perspective. When I go to the class first, she make me to as a leader.

Corrected 

She was the head director of my class, when I was a high school student I didn’t like to have conversation with other people / I was shy / introverted. I always introverted when I was a teenager. I have a little friends, I have boyfriends much more than girls. I think talking with / to boys easier than girls. My teacher introduce me to a teacher who is in charge of the radio room, I must read many messages to some students department everyday. And I become extroverted. She changed my personality / mind / outlook / perspective. When I go to the class first, she make me to as a leader.

Grammar

verb 1 + to + verb 2
I like to read

verb 1 + verb 2 + ing
I like reading

thing 1, thing 2, and thing 3

My mother liked Japanese
My mother liked Japanese culture / people
My mother liked Japan

in March

he is lost his mind
he is lost his mind

he broke up with me first

I have the first friend in university

how long have you been with your friend
I have been with my friend for 7 years old