VIP Class Notes (Nicholas)[S]

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The woman problem is he broken her arm and he’s gonna have a violin concert – she gonna play – and there’s two ways she said the first one was keep doing it but he worried about if she can doing that great because she didn’t practice for a long time and the second one was asking someone to take her place, but she said the guy who called Jim he’s probably unreliable person and he probably will be late. I think keep asking jim to take her place because give someone some chance – sometimes that are unreliable doesnt mean they are always unreliable and you can just tell him how important for you – so maybe you can just keep calling him until he’s on time.

Original

The man left his schedule at the same day his day first year and he cannot find the right classroom where is. Because he said it was embarrassing but actually no one cares and people won’t remember you – and you can save time – and you probably will find your class at the first time so you probably won’t late.

Corrected

The problem is that the man left his class schedule for his first day of his first year and he cannot find where the right classroom is. He considered two solutions but I think he should do the second beecause he said it was embarrassing to go into each room without knowing the teacher, but actually no one cares and people won’t remember you – and if he just moves forward with this decision you can save time – and you probably will find your class on the first attempt / try so you probably won’t be late.

Original

The importance of visual elements is it can express the emotions…The professor said there’s two different way the first was color, she gives examples like of two colors which is red can provides the strong feeling and the blue provides the peaceful feeling – and another one is texture: because you can use physical way to feel the texture if its smooth or rough or maybe you can just assume by visual / vision to feel the texture.

Corrected

Visual elements are important because they express emotions…The professor said there are two different ways of painting visually: the first was color, she gives examples like of two colors which are red and blue. Red can provide the strong feelings and the blue provides the peaceful feelings – and another way is texture: because you can use a visual way to “feel” the texture whether it’s smooth or rough or maybe you can just assume it visually.

Original

The woman problem is he broken her arm and he’s gonna have a violin concert – she gonna play – and there’s two ways she said the first one was keep doing it but he worried about if she can doing that great because she didn’t practice for a long time and the second one was asking someone to take her place, but she said the guy who called Jim he’s probably unreliable person and he probably will be late. I think keep asking jim to take her place because give someone some chance – sometimes that are unreliable doesnt mean they are always unreliable and you can just tell him how important for you – so maybe you can just keep calling him until he’s on time.

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