VIP Class Notes (Nate)[S]

This past week I had lunch with my friends, in Hungmai, seafood restaurant. I only know oysters, salmon and fish. This seafood which we had was from Dailin. I watched a movie in cinema, which is named eight hundred. The story is about japanese and Chinese war. Yeah it is a very sad and warm movie, the favorite part is the last chines battle, they stay in a building, they’re hard to fight a Japanese battle,they’re only eight hundred Chinese people and they’re fighting two thousand Japanese battle. It didn’t talk who won.

From Monday to Friday I just work and do yoga. I just stayed at home to watch tv show. It is a Chinese tv show, it talk about some actors open a Chinese restaurant and the story talks about what happens in this restaurant. It is a reality T.V show, the fourth season they only stay, they open this restaurant in Wuhan, they can’t go abroad. The first second and third season, they open the restaurant abroad. They want to show Chinese foods to different foreigners.

We usually talk about our emotions/ feelings/ co workers/bosses/ boyfriends/ and husbands. I a little stressed recently because of job,  I feel a little not safe, I don’t have a lot of works to do now, because there is a project which is separate to another partner and who is control the whole of this project by himself I don’t need to follow project. I feel a little disappointed and I don’t have a lot of works to do I’m a little worried . The point is I don’t have any goals in my job, that is the point in my mind. If I go back to school now I don’t know what major I can study, I don’t have any goals, a few years later I will find the goals. I want to go to America to study business, I love San Francisco.  I feel it is built for and a very young city. There is sea around this city, I love the buildings the beach and sunshine in the city.

CORRECTED VERSION

This past week I had lunch with my friends, in Hungmai, seafood restaurant. I only know oysters, salmon and fish. This seafood which we had was from Dailin. I watched a movie in(the) cinema, which is named eight hundred. The story is about (a) japanese and Chinese war. Yeah it is a very sad and warm movie, the (my) favorite part is the last Chinese battle, they stay (were) in a building. they’re hard to fight a Japanese battle They’re only eight hundred Chinese people and they’re fighting two thousand Japanese (people) battle. It didn’t talk (say) who won.

From Monday to Friday I just (had) work and do (went to) yoga. I just stayed at home to watch(ed) tv show(s). It is a Chinese tv show, it talk(s) about some actors open(ing) a Chinese restaurant and the story talks about what happens in this restaurant. It is a reality T.V show, the fourth season, they open this restaurant in Wuhan, (and) they can’t go abroad. The first second and third season, they open the restaurant (abroad). They want to show Chinese foods to different foreigners.

We usually talk about our emotions/ feelings/ co workers/bossses/ boyfriends/ and husbands. I am (a)  little stressed recently because of (my) job. I don’t have a lot of works to do now, because there is a project which is separate to (for) another partner and who is (in) control the whole of this project by himself (and) I don’t need to (be apart of this) follow project. I feel a little disappointed and I don’t have a lot of works to do I’m a little worried . The point is I don’t have any goals (right now) in my job, that is the point in my mind. If I go back to school now I don’t know what major I can (will) study, I don’t have any goals, a few years later I will find the (new) goals. I want to go to America to study business, I love San Francisco.  I feel it is built for (me) and (it is) a very young city. The sea near me, I love the buildings, the beach, and sunshine.

Vocabulary

“Battle” [There was a battle between two armies.]

“Concern”[The concern was that team would not finish the project on time.]

“Economics” [The economics of business is a course included in the masters degree.]

Pronunciation

“War” – “Make sure the “r” is a hard “r”

“Mural” -“Make sure the “r” is hard”