VIP Class Notes (Nate)

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Actually I’m trying to meet up with new people, I attend(ed) a social language mix exchange, you go into a bar and you talk about anything. I really want to exchange different lives and different ideas of (with) others. I don’t have the opportunity (usually) to experience this outside of work. I want to meet new interesting people with new hobbies.

I really like talking about life purpose, some philosophy (topics) stuff with people. If I met you (for) the first time I would ask you a “purpose” question. Actually I’m a little confused, I used to be really focused on my job, my job was my life. Now I think I really have to do something after work, I should learn (about a hobby) something, other than my job. Maybe an MBA class. Im not an outdoor person, so I’m into unique and niche interests, I really want to learn some skills in my life. Psychology, Psychology is the way to truly get to know a person, sometimes you only see a persons behavior but you really want to dig into why he/she are behaving like this. Astrology is about (a) combination of your birth charts, which includes many different (insights into someones life) hints,  also a way to get to know a person.

I think Leo is super confident in themselves and sometimes arrogant, they have a high standard for them selves and they re always afraid of losing face. Because They care so much about there appearance. I think Leos do have (are) overly confident in themselves, my traits are more inherited, it isn’t (they arent) that prominent.

Im trying my best to be a better person (in order) to embrace different cultures and individuals. and (I want to) be more open minded, most parents tend to judge people in weird ways.

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Actually I’m trying to meet up with new people, I attend(ed) a social language mix exchange, you go into a bar and you talk about anything. I really want to exchange different lives and different ideas of (with) others. I don’t have the opportunity (usually) to experience this outside of work. I want to meet new interesting people with new hobbies.

I really like talking about life purpose, some philosophy (topics) stuff with people. If I met you (for) the first time I would ask you a “purpose” question. Actually I’m a little confused, I used to be really focused on my job, my job was my life. Now I think I really have to do something after work, I should learn (about a hobby) something, other than my job. Maybe an MBA class. Im not an outdoor person, so I’m into unique and niche interests, I really want to learn some skills in my life. Psychology, Psychology is the way to truly get to know a person, sometimes you only see a persons behavior but you really want to dig into why he/she are behaving like this. Astrology is about (a) combination of your birth charts, which includes many different (insights into someones life) hints,  also a way to get to know a person.

I think Leo is super confident in themselves and sometimes arrogant, they have a high standard for them selves and they re always afraid of losing face. Because They care so much about there appearance. I think Leos do have (are) overly confident in themselves, my traits are more inherited, it isn’t (they arent) that prominent.

Im trying my best to be a better person (in order) to embrace different cultures and individuals. and (I want to) be more open minded, most parents tend to judge people in weird ways.

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