VIP Class Notes (Mark) [S]

I like the types of movies about history or some reality. I don’t like the science fiction movies very much. I like the stories about the reality of people. The reality stories about the people. I saw a movie named called Midway. It is same similar with to another movie. I like the Midway much more than the pearl harbor because the Midway is just describes the reality about of war. Maybe there is are some exaggerated the stories in the movie. The environment is was very horrible in at that time.

Original

Though I haven’t been some wars, but in China everyone saw many movies or tv series about wars. There are some big problem is, it was very dangerous for everyome or for citizens about daily life. Maybe they could lose their lives, and the business and economic could be worse and worse during the war. The children cannot get normal education during the war time. Many women could lose their husband because during the war time most of men should participate in army to fight against the enemy. Every country has some historical buildings or belongings but during the war the remarkable buildings of other ancient stuff could be destroyed. Nowadays it is time of globalization and between countries or a part of one country should be cooperate and communicate peacefully.

Revised

Though I haven’t been through some wars, but in China everyone saw have seen many movies or tv series about wars. There are were some big problem is, it was is very dangerous for everyone‘s or for citizens about daily life. Maybe they people could would lose their lives, and the business and economics could would be worse and worse during the war. The children cannot wouldn’t get normal education during the war time. Many women could would lose their husbands because during the war time most of men should participate be in the army to fight against the enemy. Every country has some historical buildings or belongings artifacts but during the war these remarkable buildings of other ancient stuff could or artifacts would be destroyed. Nowadays it is a time of globalization and between countries or different a parts of one country should be cooperate and communicate peacefully.

Pronunciation

modern (MA DERN)

children (CHILL DRIN)

nowadays (NOW ADAYS)