VIP Class Notes (Mark)

Prior Class Writing Homework

China has 55 minorities except Han, it is the most minorities country worldwide. Each minority has their own language, but just several large scale minorities have characters. Most minorities live in the area which are far from cities, especially in southwest and northwest of China, and live on farming, fishing and hunting, As we all know that minorities love singing and dancing, music is always full of their daily life.
Minorities have unique culture and custom because of the isolated social relation and the beautiful living environment. Furthermore, there are many mysterious stories and legends about their ancestor. The dresses, songs, buildings and handicrafts are all the embodiments of their culture. All these factors are so attractive for tourists.
The minorities area is not as developed as big cities, the purpose of government policy is not just to develop their economics, but also to maintain their culture and custom. So, there are many positive discrimination policies for minorities.

Revised

China has 55 minorities except the Han, and it is has the most minorities of any country worldwide. Each minority has their own language, but just several large scale minorities just have characters. Most minorities live in the areas which are far from cities, especially in the southwest and northwest of China, and live on farming, fishing and hunting, As we all know that minorities love singing and dancing, music is always full of fills their daily life.
Minorities have unique cultures and customs because of their isolated social relation and the beautiful living environment. Furthermore, there are many mysterious stories and legends about their ancestors. The dresses, songs, buildings and handicrafts are all the embodiments of their culture. All these factors are so attractive for tourists.
The minorities area where minorities live is not as developed as big cities, and the purpose of government policy is not just to develop their economics, but also to maintain their culture and customs. So, there are many positive discrimination policies for minorities.

Grammar

china society – Chinese society

most of parts of society. or, most of society

the most of facts of daily life – the [majority] of daily life

many activities about feminist feminism

in the Middle East Asia

the rights of women is are not so equal

in nowadays

the income equality problem [inequality] between men and women

maybe companies will think about the women have having a childREN children

this is legally leaves for pregnant [maternity leave]

its depends on companies, but…

will pay more attention to care caring for her children

depends on the potentials of the person

Vocabulary

income inequality – a lack of equality in income based on race or gender

eg. Income inequality impacts poor people more than rich people in a recession.

facets – the parts of a problem

eg. There are many facets to the problem of India’s water shortage.

Pronunciation

age

serious (SEER EE US)

mysterious (MIS TEER EE US)

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