VIP Class Notes (Li)[W]

Write about “Home Alone” and tell me which part is your favourite scene.

Vocabulary

once every/a month

once every two months

layer – a level of paper/skin/wood/brick

ex. Toilet paper has 3 to 4 layers.

I will have a football match.

The medicine will help you grow skin. It is liquid and you put on it and it become like a skin. Then, make like skin and your skin will grow inside.

Revised:

I will have a football match.

The medicine will help you grow skin. It is a liquid and you put on it your skin and when it dries, it will look like a layer of skin. Then, your skin will grow inside. 

Popeye went to see his dad. But at first, his dad thought he was a bad guy so he called a monkey to kill him but Popeye killed the monkey. Then his dad called a jellyfish to kill Popeye but Popeye killed him to. Finally, a sea monster wanted to kill him, but a tin of spinach. His dad saw it so he know that Popeye is his son. Then he ate the spinach and killed the monster. Finally, they went back home.

Revised: 

Popeye went to see his dad. But at first, his dad thought he was a bad guy so he called/ordered a monkey to kill him, but Popeye killed the monkey. Then, his dad called a jellyfish to kill Popeye but Popeye killed him too. Finally, a sea monster wanted to kill him too, but a tin of spinach rolled out of Popeye’s pocket. His dad saw it so he realised that Popeye is his son. Then, he ate the spinach and killed the monster. Finally, they went back home.