VIP Class Notes (Li)[W]

Writing exercise

A while ago, I saw a movie called “悲伤逆æµæˆæ²³â€. The girl get gynecological diseases accidentally, but they are violent on campus. In the end, the girl can’t resist the gossip and commit suicide.So in my opinion, the real weapon to kill a girl is her classmates’ dirty words.

Revised: 

A while ago, I saw a movie called “悲伤逆æµæˆæ²³â€. The girl get had a/was accidentally diagnosed with a gynecological disease accidentally, but they her classmates were  are violent to her/abusing her on campus. In the end, the girl can’t couldn’t resist the gossip and commited suicide. So in my opinion, the real weapon to that killed the girl was her classmates’ dirty words/gossip/verbal abuse.

Vocabulary

abuse: to treat ( a person or animal) in a harsh or harmful way

eg. He was abused by his classmates in school.

other forms: verbal abuse /physical abuse 

diagnose: to recognise a disease, illness etc.

eg. She was diagnosed with a rare disease.

stay up late: 熬夜 

eg. Staying up late is a bad habit.

to get expelled = to be kicked out (of school) 

eg. He was expelled from school because he kept skipping class.

warning: something that tells someone about possible danger or trouble 警告,警戒

eg. She gave me a warning about the difficulties of this job?

kindergarten: 幼稚园

drive (someone) insane: to annoy or frustrate one to the point where he/she can’t stand it

eg. My brother drives me insane with his annoying personality

Grammar

somewhere in the middle – somewhere in between 

young people should do hardworking – young people should be hardworking

soft drinks is harm to you – soft drinks are harmful to you

one years ago – one year ago

very cold sport – very popular sports

Pronunciation

kindergarden – kin-der-gar-den

primary – pa-ri-mary