VIP Class Notes (Li)[W]

Writing exercise

It’s about a man named Jack and a boy named Sam. Sam is a boy and he is in school. Jack is one of the teachers in that school. One day, Jack was telling everybody how to use a laser gun. Sam is very interested but two dementors came and they caught Jack. They said, “Jack was a bad guy”. But, Sam didn’t believe that so he used his laser gun to shoot these dementors and they disappeared. Jack is very thankful so he taught Sam how to teleport. Both Sam and Jack were very happy.

Revised: 

The story is/It’s about a man named Jack and a boy named Sam. Sam is a boy and he is currently in school. Jack is one of the teachers in that school. One day, Jack was telling teaching/educating everybody how to use a laser gun. Sam is very interested but two dementors came and they caught Jack. They said, “Jack was a bad guy”. But, Sam didn’t believe that so he used his laser gun to shoot at these dementors and they disappeared. Jack is very thankful so he taught Sam how to teleport. Both Sam and Jack were very happy.

Vocabulary

filthy: dirty

rodents: small animals such as mice and rats

weaned off: to make someone gradually stop depending on something that they like and have become used to

Piglets are weaned off from the mother’s milk pretty quickly.

Tusks: a long large tooth (of an elephant or pigs)  that projects when the mouth is closed

Grammar

don’t forget the ‘s’ at the end of the word – a den among rocks, dug out among tree roots