VIP Class Notes (Li)[S/W]

Write down what you’ve seen today

Vocabulary

enrgy -> energy

drain energy/lose energy/out of energy

ice rink: frozen surface that you skate on

backstage: where performers rest before they perform

punch: hit with your fist

performance – the show

performer – person

drop to the ground/fall down/on the ground

opposite/across from/on the other side

Grammar

good – adjective

He does a good job.

well – adverb

He does the job well.

Mr Bean go to the ice rink and he go to the wrong seat and his seat on the other side. He leaves the seat and he’s lazy so he goes on the ice rink and go to the other. Then he finds his book is on the side so he goes on the ice rink again and he go to the room that and hit the performer. Then he performs the performer’s performance and he performs very good. The woman hit on the wall so she becomes angry at Mr Bean. At last, the performer hit Mr Bean and Mr Bean drop to the ground.

Revised: 

Mr Bean goes to the ice rink and he goes to the wrong seat so he finds that his seat is on the other side/opposite side. He leaves the seat because he’s lazy so he walks on the ice rink to go to the other side. Then, he finds/sees that his book is on the side so he goes back on the ice rink again and he heads/makes his way to the room and hits the performer. Next, he performs the performer’s performance and he does a good job/performs well. The woman hits the wall so she becomes angry at Mr Bean. At last, the performer hit/punches Mr Bean and Mr Bean drops to the ground.

Atom didn’t win at first, but, later, the black robot had less energy, then Atom win, and it became the champion of “WBE”. All the people loved Atom very much. They had more and more money.

Revised: 

Atom didn’t win at first, but later, the black robot had less energy/drained too much energy. Then, Atom won, and it became the champion of “WBE”. All the people/Everyone loves Atom very much. Max and Charlie earned more and more money because of Atom.