VIP Class Notes (Li)[S/W]

Homework

https://breakingnewsenglish.com

Pick an article and read it. If you have any words that you don’t know, you can discuss in the next class.

Speaking

About 2 years, I was working in a local company so I don’t want to forget English. I think my issue is my grammar, chinglish and also speaking. I want to express in a higher way, more good sentence. I think it’s very obvious to me for a long time you don’t use it, you feel very strange to express by myself.

Revised: 

I have been working at a local company for 2 years now, so I don’t want to forget English. I think my main issues are my grammar, chinglish and also speaking. I want to express in a better/higher level/more advanced way and also make more good better sentences. I think it’s very obvious to me that if you don’t use it for a long time, you find it strange/weird/hard expressing by yourself.


The people who is first time to SH. I think I will recommend him to visit the two place first. The first one is Yuyuan and the other is . I think these two place represent SH yesterday and today. Yuyan has a historical story and some building is historical style. The Lujiajue is a very modern place and shows the like the international city. I like Yuyuan more. I think SH combined the varies of culture, foreigners or other place of China. So, I think Yuyuan is a very typical style of SH. In Yuyuan, we have many memories in childhood. It’s still contains many views and the foods that we enjoy in our childhood. I think Lujizue is similar to other city in China or other countries.

Revised: 

For people who are visting SH for the first time, to SH. I think I will recommend them to visit these two places first. The first one is Yuyuan and the other is Lujiazue. I think these two places represent the old and new SH/the history of SH and modern SH. yesterday and today. Yuyan has a historical story background and some buildings are historical. style. Lujiazue is a very modern place and shows the looks like the an international city. I like Yuyuan more. I think is a SH combination of the a variety of cultures, such as culture from other countries and other places in China. So, I think Yuyuan has a very typical style of SH. In Yuyuan, we have many memories from childhood. It still contains many buildings and the food that we enjoy from our childhood. I think Lujizue is similar to other cities in China and other countries.

Grammar

traffic fees – transport is cheap/transportation price 

Writing

There are many on line courses have been launching with the development of internet and smart phone.
Not only foreign language,but also many professional courses, like mathematics, program, office software, business and so on.
Of course,on line courses help us to saving much time, we can take courses what we want to learn with pieces of time. Online courses offer people a easier way to take various professional courses also.

Revised:

With the development of the internet and the smart phone/With the development of technology, there are many online courses available/there are many courses available online.   

Not only limited to foreign language courses, but also many professional courses, like mathematics, programming, office software, business and so on.

Online courses help us to save much time, we can take whatever/any courses we want at any pieces of time. Online courses/They also offer people an easier way to take various professional courses.