VIP Class Notes (Li)[S]

Storytelling

Vocabulary

glasses: something you wear help you see better

eg. I am going to buy a pair of glasses later.

eg. Li wears glasses every day because he can’t see very well.

Ouch/Ow

make up a story about… (something)

computer screen/monitor

climb/go on the slide

race – for running

competition – drawing/art/music/singing

delighted/very happy/joyful

Grammar

maybe he need to wash   – maybe he needs a bath/shower 

he/she/it/the lion   +  verb (present tense) – now/a story

the lion/she/he/Aiai  jumps/sings/walks/climbs 

One day there is a happy lion. Its called Mr Leaf, but everyone called him, Mr Lion because they think Mr Leaf that name is not good. One day Mr Lion go to the park, he go on the slide then he slide on the slide. Then Mr Lion go to play the swing. He swing and swing. “Oops,” He fell on the leaves. When Mr Lion go to the lake and drink some water, “Oops,” he fell into the water. But, he get a big fish to home. But, his shoes goes on the sky. Then, he jump up and get the shoes down. But the shoes is yucky so he go to the lake and wash the shoes. “Oops.” The shoe fell into the water. He think it’s funny so he dive into the water and get the shoes out. But, he go to the hospital because he doesn’t know where is his home. Then, he walk and walk, he go into the zoo. Then, he asked the man how to get in his home. The man get the lion into his home. But, the lion jump and jump, then he jump over the moon. Then, he jump over the sun. Then, he jump over the star. So he is tired and he ate 100 fish, 50 cows and 3 pigs. Then, he is full, he still jump and jump and jump. He jump over the sky. The end.

Revised: 

One day there is a happy lion. Its called Mr Leaf, but everyone calls him, Mr Lion because they think Mr Leaf is not a good name. Then, Mr Lion goes to the park and he goes on/climbs the slide and he slides down. Then, Mr Lion goes to play on the swing. He swings and swings. “Oops.” He falls on the leaves. When Mr Lion goes to the lake and drinks some water, “Oops,” he fell into the water. But, he catches a big fish to bring back home. But, his shoe fly to the sky. Then, he jumps up and gets back the shoe. But, the shoe is yucky so he goes to the lake and washes the shoe. “Oops.” The shoe drops into the water. He thinks it’s funny so he dives into the water and gets the shoe out. But, he goes to the hospital because he doesn’t know where is his home. Then, he walks and walks, he goes to the zoo. Then, he asks the man how to get to his home. The man brings the lion to his home. But, the lion jumps and jumps, then he jumps over the moon. Then, he jumps over the sun. Then, he jumps over the stars. So he is tired and he eats 100 fish, 50 cows and 3 pigs. Then, he is full, but he still jumps and jumps and jumps. He jumps over the sky. The end.