VIP Class Notes (Lindsay)

My dear friends:
We haven’t seen each other for a week.How are you doing recently?Last class we were talked about the House of Plantagenet second king Richard I,the Lionheart who has defeated Saladin three times in spite of being outnumbered. He was crowned as one of the outstanding military strategises in Europe during the Medieval time.He was a scymbol chivalry of the Medieval and has set example for modern British gentlemen with his manners.
Now I’ll going to tell another story about this extraordinary dynasty,the third king,John the Landless king,despised by all men….Oh,Christ………..I have a bad cold and running a fever.My dizziness is terrible and I can’t write any more.Now I must go to bed immediately before the cold is aggravating………
I’m so sorry for this.Next time I promise that I’ll tell more stoies ……Oh,god….I can’t take it anymore……
I’m going to bed and I’ll see your next time.

Revised:

We haven’t seen each other for a week.How are you doing recently?Last class, we talked about the House of Plantagenet the  second king Richard I,the Lionheart who has defeated Saladin three times in spite of being outnumbered. He was crowned as one of the outstanding military strategists in Europe during the Medieval time.He was a symbolic chivalry of the Medieval and had set an example for modern British gentlemen with his manners.
Now I’ll going to tell another story about this extraordinary dynasty,the third king,John the Landless king,despised by all men….

i am in a finance company. It is a local company. My job is auditing contracts and it’s very boring because the work is repeating/ I do this again and again. I want to go to England for graduate school. Learn history about British. I want to learn history about medieval history. So learning English is very essential/important for my study.

I searched the historical people/events from books called “Plantagenet”. In order to understand the book, i learn new words from the app that I’m using everyday. I learn the words about 37 each day. I don’t think it helps because i forget those words fast.

When i meet them, i escape because i get nervous so i can’t talk with them. I have to english and how to speak with them and listen to the teacher how to pronounce and talk.

Grammar

Who only refers people. Which refers to things, that refers to things. Where refers to places.

Last class we were talked about the House of Plantagenet second king Richard I,the Lionheart who has defeated Saladin three times in spite of being outnumbered

the second king Richard I has defeated Saladin Guthrie times in spite of being outnumbered, which/ that won the name of the Lionheart.

who, refers to the people that we talked about earlier in the sentence. In this case, it is Richard.

eg: i hate doing contract auditing, which i have done repeatedly everyday, so i feel so boring at work.

I live in pudong, where it is far away from Jing’an temple.

It/ this/ that refers to subjective of the last sentence or the things happen in the last sentence. 

Eg: i hate doing contract auditing. It/this/that is too boring.

I don’t like my job because i don’t love it. That’s why i want to quit my job.

I am planning for my graduate school in England. It/this is my dream and i am preparing english now. ——- i am planning for my graduate school in England, which is my dream and i am preparing English now.

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