VIP Class Notes (Lily)[W/S/R]

I used to had a cat who was name PP. He was black with gray and had long hair. When I got home, he always came up to me. He was used to following with me ,so that we slept together. Some times he was mischievous , he bite my heel and than run away.When he met stranger,he was timid and always hide to closet. We had good time for 3 years together. One day I adopted a orange cat and I hope they made friends,so they were not lonely. But PP accidentally passed away when orange cat came 6 days after. When I found PP’s corpse，I knew he was very painful befor he died.Now PP has passed away over 5 months ,I still miss him and regret.

Revised:

I used to have a cat who was named PP. He was black and grey with had long hair. When I got home, he always came up to me. He was used to following with me, so that‘s why we slept together. Sometimes he was mischievous/naughty , he would bite my heel and then run away.When he meets strangers, he was always timid and always hide in the closet. We had a good time for 3 years together. One day I adopted an orange cat and I hope they could make friends,so they were not lonely. But PP accidentally passed away after the orange cat came for 6 days after. When I found PP’s corpse, I knew he was very painful before he died. Now PP has passed away for over 5 months, I still miss him and feel regretful. 

Vocabulary

1. hair–> dog hair, cat hair

ex: I don’t like dogs that shed hair

2. fur–> bear, fox

ex: Some people like to wear fur during winter.

3. naughty- someone who doesn’t behave well

ex: She is a naughty girl, she never listens to her teacher.

4. allergic= to have an allergic reaction to somethings, animals

ex: I am allergic TO __________ (cats, dogs, animals)

You are allergic TO __________(beef, peanuts, seafood, watermelon, eggs, milk)

5. replace= to switch something for another thing

ex: I want to replace the white table with a black one.

You are irreplaceable.

This is broken, I want a replacement.

6. sick= not feeling well

ex: I am sick today, I cannot come to work

Sorry I feel sick.

I like cats, dogs. I like cats because they are convenient to take care. They can go to bathroom by themselves. I like very big dogs, like the Alaska. A cat so big looks very special. I want to buy mianyi cat, but before I adopted PP, so I don’t buy. I prefer to adopt some animals to replace buying. PP is my favourite one, we were/ have been together for the longest (time).

Revised

I like cats and dogs. I like cats because they are convenient to take care of. They can go to the bathroom by themselves. I like very big dogs, like the Alaska. I like mianyi cats because they are big. A cat that big looks very special. I want to buy mianyi cat, but I have already adopted PP, so I didn’t buy it. I prefer to adopt some animals to replace buying. PP is my favourite one, we were/ have been together for the longest (time).

In England, three window cleaners wanted to make sick children in a hospital feel better, so they put on superhero costumes and got ready for a visit.

The surprise for the children was when the superheroes rode down the side of the hospital window.

They stopped at the sixth floor above the ground where the children sat by the window. When the window cleaners came in front of the children, the children were excited to see the window cleaners as superheroes. One window cleaner was glad. He said that it was important just to make one child smile.