VIP Class Notes (Lily)[W/S/R]

Jumbo go to the zoo, Jumbo can do one trick, stand on his head.

At January, my family go to Cambodia. At Cambodia, I like sitting on a boat to looking sunset. I don’t like go to Angkor Wat, because it is so hot and so big. I ate ice-cream, egg, apple, and beef candy in Cambodia. I want to go to Beijing because I want to walk on the Great Wall. Last time I go to the Great Wall, I thought it people was not very very.

On my birthday, I play with my little brother. My little brother is so cute, he is 6 years old. My birthday present is a book and a artist box. In the box, it has crayons, colored pencils, colored pens, artist books, it’s for drawing.

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Jumbo goes to the zoo, Jumbo can do one trick, he can stand on his head.

In January, my family and I went to Cambodia. In Cambodia, I like sitting on a boat to watch the sunset. I don’t like to go to Angkor Wat, because it is so hot and so big. I ate ice-cream, egg, apple, and beef candy in Cambodia. I want to go to Beijing because I want to walk on the Great Wall. Last time I went to the Great Wall, I thought there weren’t too many people. 

On my birthday, I played with my little brother. My little brother is so cute, he is 6 years old. My birthday present is a book and an artist box. In the box, it has crayons, colored pencils, colored pens, and one drawing book.

Tom and Polly had a new toy. It was a little gray elephant. His name was Jumbo. “I like Jumbo”, said Polly. He is a good little elephant, but I want to see a big elephant, big elephants are funny, toy elephants are not funny. They saw four big elephants in the elephant house. One elephant was very very big. Polly said, “Look jumbo, see that big big elephant”. Then a man came along and looked at Jumbo. “Is that a baby elephant?” he said. Polly laughed and said, “Oh no, this is just a toy elephant, his name is Jumbo”.

The man said “Jumbo must see a big elephant do some tricks”. The man went to a big elephant, “Up up, stand up!” he said. and the elephant sat down. How tome and polly laughed. The big elephant looked so funny. “Now the big elephant will stand on his head”. Polly said, “Oh my, I wish Jumbo could do that”. The next morning, Polly went to get Jumbo.

March 2
I am so surprise!Why?Because my mom find a video.I like.This video is New York’s firefighters race!They have there project.1.is ladder climbing competition.2.is Aerial ladder and climbing ladder competition.3.is the water.Oh!Do you think it is hard?

March 3
Do you know?Lately I super super like a book.It called M small circle!What a funny name.It also called:A small circle of rice to learn.Wow!What long book name!This book’s writer’s name is strange to.It called North Cat!When I get the book,I will read and read

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March 2
I am so surprised !Why?Because my mom got a video.I like this video, it’s called the New York’s firefighters race!They have three events: first one is ladder climbing competition. Second one is  Aerial ladder and climbing ladder competition.Third one is the water.Oh!Do you think it is hard?

March 3
Do you know?Lately I really really like a book.It is called M small circle!What a funny name.It is also called:A small circle of rice to learn.Wow!What a long book name!This book’s writer’s name is strange too.It is called North Cat!When I get the book, I will read and read.