VIP Class Notes (Lily)[W/S]

Vocabulary

1.rabbit
bunny=small rabbit🐰

2. dog
puppy= small dog 🐶

3. cat
kitten= small cat🐱

tell me about Zootopia
One day, the rabbit wants go to Zootopia. She wants to be a police. She makes 213 tickets. There is a bad fox, the fox goes to the ice-cream shop, but the fox haven’t got money, an the fox go. But the rabbit have got the money and then she give the money, and the fox take the ice-cream go. The rabbit see the fox is making ice-cream to buy, to want to have more money. The rabbit is angry and she want to give ticket to the fox.

Revised

One day, the rabbit wants go to Zootopia. She wants to be a police. She gave 213 tickets. There is a bad fox, the fox goes to the ice-cream shop, but the fox doesn’t have money, and the fox wants to leave. But the rabbit has the money and then she pays for the ice-cream , and the fox takes the ice-cream and goes away. The rabbit sees the fox is making ice-cream to sell, to want to have more money. The rabbit is angry and she wants to give the ticket to the fox.

My favorite film is cars. I lik this film becauce there are many race cars. There is a car called Mcqeen, Mcqueen wants to go to the race. He wins the race.

Revised

My favorite film is about cars. I like this film because there are many race cars. There is a car called Mcqueen, Mcqueen wants to go to the race. He wins the race.