VIP Class Notes (Lily)[S/W/R]

Vocabulary

1. thief= people who steal things

ex: A thief steals a bag and a policeman catches him.

2. call= 打电话

ex: I see my father calling the policeman.

3. catch= 抓到

ex: The policeman catches the thief.

ex: I cannot catch the thief.

4. jail= 监狱

ex: Bad people go to jail.

ex: One thief is in the jail.

Tom and Polly had a new toy. It was a little gray elephant. His name is Jumbo. I like jumbo, said Polly. He is a good little elephant, but I want to see a big elephant, big elephants are funny. Toy elephants are not very funny.

Tom said,”we will take Jumbo to the zoo.” Then he can see the big elephants. So Tom and Polly and Jumbo went to the zoo. “I like the zoo,” said Polly, “Jumbo likes it too”

They saw four big elephants in the elephant house. One elephant very very big. Polly said “Look jumbo, see that big big elephant “. Then a man came along and looked at Jumbo. “Is that a baby elephant?”he said. Polly laughed and said “Oh No, this is just a toy elephant”. His name is Jumbo.

introduction :Three see one thief in his home in his garden at the afternoon.

Body: One boy his name is Three. He can see one thief steal money. Three he call telephone 110 to the policeman. Policeman say “ok” and he catch the thief. Policeman take thief in the jail.

Conclusion: You see a thief, can call telephone to the policeman.

Revised:

introduction :Three sees one thief at his house in his garden in the afternoon.

Body: The boy’s name is Three. He sees one thief stealing money. Three calls 110 to the policeman. Policeman says “ok” and he catches the thief. Policeman takes the thief to the jail.

Conclusion: if you see a thief,  you can call telephone to the policeman.

In winter, I eat ice-cream . In winter is very cold.

In summer, I can eat watermelon. In summer is very hot.

Revised

In winter, I eat ice-cream . In winter, it is very cold.

In summer, I can eat watermelon. In summer, it is very hot.