VIP Class Notes (Lily)[S/W/R]

Introduction: Two boys are on the track at night, they are running a race.

Body: Two boys run, one boy his name is Red and one boy name is Green. Two boys can run, one boy is fast, one boy is slow. Green fast finishes, he beats Red and he wins. Crowd is very happy, they cheer for Green.

Conclusion: Green is very happy. Red is very angry.

Revised

Introduction: Two boys are on the track at night, they are running a race.

Body: Two boys run, one boy‘s name is Red and one boy’s name is Green. Two boys can run, one boy is fast, one boy is slow. Green finishes before Red, he beats Red and he wins. The crowd is very happy, they cheer for Green.

Conclusion: Green is very happy. Red is very angry.

What is this story about? 

The boy’s name is Bobby, his grandmother gave him one chick. The next summer, this chick got/grew big and she has one egg.

Vocabulary

1.race= 比赛

ex: I want to be in a race.

2. beat= 打败

ex: Green beats Red in the race.

ex: I beat my mother in a game.

3. crowd= 群众

ex: The crowd cheers for Green because he wins the race.

4.finish= 完成

ex: I finished my homework.

5. surprise= 惊喜

ex: My mom gave me surprise birthday party

ex: My mom surprised me with a dog!

every summer Bobby went to see his grandfather and grandmother. They live on a farm. Bobby liked to go to the farm. He had a good time there. He liked to help grandfather feed the cows and pigs. It was fun to e at the farm. Bobby liked to help grandmother feed the chicken. One day grandmother gave him a little yellow chicken. “You may have this little chicken for your own, but you must feed it everyday” she said. Oh thank you, he said. Every day Bobby went to feed the little yellow chicken. He gave it water too.

Soon the summer was over, and father came to take Bobby home. He said goodbye to grandmother and grandfather. Then he ran to see his chicken. Goodbye little yellow chick, said Bobby. Do not forget me. I will come to see you again next summer! Next summer, Bobby went back to the farm. He was glad to see grandfather and grandmother. He ran to grandmother and asked her about his little yellow chicken. “where is my chicken?” he asked. Grandmother said “we will see”. Soon they went to the barn. Bobby looked and looked, but he did not see his little yellow chicken. Just then a big brown hen jumped from a nest. “Here is your little yellow chicken” said grandmother. Bobby saw an egg in the nest. “Look, look!” he said. “I did not know my little chicken, but she didn’t forget me, she gave me an egg for breakfast!”.

One bear wants to get the honey, he climbs the tree.