VIP Class Notes (Lily)[S]
Vocabulary
- cheer: WHHOooottttt, run run Joe, go go Joe, faster faster!
ex: Lily cheered for Joe when he was riding his bicycle.
2. race: people running for the first place.
ex: I like to race.
3. beat: one person wins another person
ex: Rafa beats Herman for the running race.
Speaking exercise
Tian Tai Mountain
Tian tai Mountain is outside Shanghai. I go to there because in the New Year. I go to here with dad and mom. In the morning and afternoon Im playing in the TianTai Mountain. I like Tiantai Mountain because it’s tall. I feel too scary because there’s jaguar in the mountain, but I don’t see. My mom told me have jaguar. I see many people in Tiantai Mountain.
Revised
Tian Tai Mountain
Tian tai Mountain is outside of Shanghai. I went there because it is the Chinese New Year. I went there with my dad and mom. In the morning and afternoon I played in the TianTai Mountain. I like Tiantai Mountain because it’s tall. I feel very scared because there’s jaguar in the mountain, but I didn’t see it. My mom told me there are jaguars. I saw many people in Tiantai Mountain.
introduction: Rafa and Herman are running in the afternoon. They are running in the playground.
Body: Rafa and Herman are race. The crowd is cheer. The Rafa is win. The race is finished. He is very happy.
Conclusion: I learn run fast can win. I feel the story is so-so. I like stories about cars, motorcycles and dinosaurs.
Revised:
introduction: Rafa and Herman are running in the afternoon. They are running in the playground.
Body: Rafa and Herman are racing. The crowd is cheering for them. Rafa won the race. The race is finished. He is very happy.
Conclusion: I learn that if you run fast, you can win. I feel the story is so-so. I like stories about cars, motorcycles and dinosaurs.
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