VIP Class Notes (Lily)[S]

When my son was four month, he has some health problem. he lack calcium, the doctor tell us you should feed him milk powder. My milk is not very good for him, so he grow up very slowly and lack nutrients, so doctor suggest us to add more milk powder in his daily feeding.My doctor said the brand is not very important, but it’s all of the American one is better than Europe one. I purchase all his powder from amazon US directly, because I don’t believe local sales. Four years ago, the HaiTao website wasn’t very popular, so I buy from US Amazon.

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When my son was four months old / a 4 month old baby, he had some health problems / issues. he lacked calcium, the doctor told / explained to / us ” you should feed him milk powder”. My milk wasn’t good enough for him, so he grew up at a slow pace and lacked nutrients, so doctor suggested us to add more milk powder to his daily feeding. My doctor said that the brand is not very important, but it’s all of the American ones are better than European ones. I purchased all of his powder from amazon US directly, because I don’t believe in local suppliers. Four years ago, the HaiTao website wasn’t very popular, so I bought powders from US Amazon directly. 

past tense

Grammar

four months old – number of months – countable
a 4 month old baby – adjective are not countable / don’t have time

5 dollars
a 5 dollar bill

Vocabulary

very slowly = at a slow pace
eg. Sometimes I learn at a slow pace