VIP Class Notes (Lily)[R/S]

Vocabulary

1.laugh- smile very happily
ex: When my mom told me a joke 笑话, I laughed.
ex: I will laugh if you tickle挠痒痒 me.

It is Friday afternoon, Jack and Paul are in the garden, they are playing.

This boy is Jack, he has a dog, the dog’s name is Paul. Paul has many dirt, Jack want to wash him. Now Paul is in a big bucket, in the bucket, it has a lot of water. Jacked used soap, it had many suds. Now Paul is come out, he is clean. Jack is very happy.

Fun in the snow

In this story, the boy and girls are playing happy. They make some snowmen, and they have an old dish-pan. There was a big found hole in the old dish-pan, a boy run to the snowman and dish-pan on his head, now snowman head will not be cold. the children all run home.

Revised

It is Friday afternoon, Jack and Paul are in the garden, they are playing.

This boy is Jack, he has a dog, the dog’s name is Paul. Paul has a lot of dirt on him, Jack wants to wash him. Now Paul is in a big bucket, in the bucket, it has a lot of water. Jacked use soap and has lots of suds. Now Paul comes out, he is clean. Jack is very happy.

Fun in the snow

In this story, the boy and girls are happily playing happy. They make some snowmen, and they have an old dish-pan. There is a big hole in the old dish-pan, a boy runs to the snowman and puts the dish-pan on its head, now snowman’s head will not be cold. All the children all run home.

Fun in the Snow

The boys and girls were happy. They were playing in the snow. Some were making snow balls. Some were making a snowman on the hill. Some were going down the hill on a big new sled. “Come on boys” called Joe. “Who wants a ride on my sled?” Two boys jumped on the sled with Joe. Away they went down the hill. Soon Bobby found an old dish-pan in the snow. “This will make a good sled”,” he said.”Here I go”.

Down, down the hill went Bobby in the old dish-pan. He went this way and that way! Round and round, faster and faster! Then over went the dish-pan, and out went Bobby. Over and over he went in the snow. How the children laughed. Bobby laughed, too. “That was a fine ride”, he said. The old dish-pan makes a good sled.

“let me ride”, said Betty, “Let me ride next,” slide Alice. All the children wanted to ride in the old dish-pan. Down the hill they went, this way and that way. Some fell out in the snow and went over and over. What a good time they had! Soon there were a round hole in the old dish-pan. The children could not ride in it. Bobby ran to the snow man and put the dish-pan on his head.  The children said, the dish-pan makes a fun hat, now his head will not be cold.