VIP Class Notes (Lily) [W]

Let’s talk about your home town or village. • What kind of place is it? • What’s the most interesting part of your town/village? • What kind of jobs do the people in your town/village do? • Would you say it’s a good place to live? (Why?)

Let’s move on to talk about accommodation. • Tell me about the kind of accommodation you live in? • How long have you lived there? • What do you like about living there? • What sort of accommodation would you most like to live in?

Vocabulary

1.check out = 收银
ex: I want to check out these things.

2. check out = to see see
ex: OMG there’s a new coffee shop, let’s check it out! 

3. new-released= the newest 新出的
ex: did you want the new released movie “Lion King?”
ex: Starbucks has many new- released mugs, let’s check them out.

1. describe a product you bought and felt happy about.
I like to collect Starbucks cups recently. There are many different pretty cups which are sold in different seasons. My first cup was bought by Starbucks Because all colleagues had. I didn’t understand until I went to the store and saw many cups what I was attract to them.Up to day, I bought five Starbucks cups. I would like to see the new cup when I passed by the store. There are too many different styles cups to choose. As soon as I bought a new one, I took out the others and appreciated them.

I use a black cup in office because it looks very cool and formal. When my boss wasn’t in the office, I use a beautiful glass to make tea which makes me happy. I think everyone need a cup. I use my cup for 6 years. I saw some people use paper cup once. I think we need to protect our city’s environment, so we can’t waste paper cups and used paper cups is not good for our health.

So I will buy more and more pretty cups not only it makes me happy but It also is a good habit to reduce pollution.

2. Describe something special that you saved money to buy.
I have a big dream which is difficult to realize. I want to buy a house because I would like to live alone. There are some reasons to explain why I need a house.
First I am not a children. I have been worked for 6 years which made me got a lot of money. I have enough money and ability to live without my parents. Actually when I worked tired, I prefer to stay in my room. If I have a house, it must be small, soft and sweet. I can buy some ingredients and make dinner by myself. After dinner I prepare several fruits for watching television.

The second reason is I could invite my best friends to my house once a week. We always meet with each other at Friday, and we would like to eat hot pot. So if I have a house, we can make hot pot by ourselves. It is cleaner and more healthy than hop pot store. We can eat food while watching movies. We can eat for a long time whenever we want to.

The last reason is I want to leave My parents alone. I think they need time to communicate with each other when I out side. They can do everything what they want to do. They don’t take care of me anymore.

Saving money to buy a house is a huge goal. I made a target which will be finished at 35 years old.

Revised

1. describe a product you bought and felt happy about.
I like to collect Starbucks mugs recently. There are many different pretty cups which are sold in different seasons. My first mug was bought at Starbucks because all colleagues have one. I didn’t understand until I went to the store and saw many attractive cups, I was drawn to them. So far, I have bought five Starbucks cups. I always want to check out to see the new-released cups when I passed by the store. There are too many different styles of cups to choose from. As soon as I bought a new one, I took out all the other mugs and appreciated/enjoyed the sight of them.

I use a black cup in office because it looks very cool and formal. When my boss is not in the office, I use a beautiful glass to make tea which makes me happy. I think everyone needs a cup. I used my cup for 6 years. I saw some people use paper cup once. I think we need to protect the environment, so we can’t waste paper cups and paper cups are not good for our health.

So I will buy more and more pretty cups, not only does it makes me happy but it also is a good habit to reduce pollution.

2. Describe something special that you saved money to buy.
I have a big dream which is difficult to realize. I want to buy a house because I would like to live alone. There are some reasons to explain why I need a house.
First I am not a child. I have been working for 6 years which made me rich. I have enough money and ability to live without my parents. Actually when I am tired from working, I prefer to stay in my room. If I have a house, it would be small, soft and sweet. I can buy some ingredients and make dinner by myself. After dinner I can prepare some fruits and watch television.

The second reason is that I could invite my best friends to my house once a week. We could meet with each other on Friday, and we could like to eat hot pot. So if I have a house, we can make hot pot by ourselves. It is cleaner and healthier than the hop pot restaurant. We can eat food while watching movies. We can eat for a long time till whenever we want to.

The last reason is that I want to leave my parents alone. I think they need time to be with each other when I out side. They can do anything they want to do. They don’t need to take care of me anymore.

Saving money to buy a house is a huge/ long-term goal. I hope I can achieve my goal before  which will be finished at 35 years old.