VIP Class Notes (Lily) [W]

Vocabulary

1.properly= 好好的
ex: can you sit properly?
ex: can you hold the pencil properly?

2. furnish= 已有家具的
ex: my apartment is furnished.
ex: I only look for furnished apartments.

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4. recommend= 推荐
ex: I strongly recommend this restaurant.
ex: I recommend you to go to Thailand and eat tropical fruits.
ex: I recommend the XXX dish to you.

5. refer= 引见
reference= 引见
ex: I had to fill out a reference contact for the application.
ex: My family doctor referred me to you.

she asked me about my english ability. 

We arrived at the hotel in Chang Chun in December. The Hotel looks like just established many days ago. I felt hot when I entered because all the house in Dong Bei have floor heating(地暖). The room was good, everything looks new. I draw the curtains(拉开窗帘) and saw the view outside which completely different from Shanghai. There were few big chimneys(大烟囱) were emitting white smoke(冒着白烟) in this city and proved heating for the city. After had a rest, we decided to eat lunch. I found a high rate BBQ restaurant nearby the hotel. The staffs of the restaurant were so enthusiasm热情的. The Boss said“老妹儿,吃得好下次再来啊“. The first attraction we arrived was Chang Chun film stadio长春电影制片厂. We got there by taxi because the expense was cheaper. I talked a lot to my mom, then the driver said I didn’t speak mandarin exactly. Maybe my speaking without pronunciation “er”儿化音.

Revised

My mom and I arrived at the hotel in Chang Chun last December. The hotel was newly built. It was warm when I entered because there is floor heating in Northern China. The room was good, everything looked new. I drew the curtains(拉开窗帘) and saw the view outside which was completely different from Shanghai. There were a few big chimneys(大烟囱) that were emitting white smoke, which provided heating for the city. After having a rest, we decided to eat lunch. I found a high rated BBQ restaurant nearby the hotel. The staffs of the restaurant were so enthusiastic/ passionate. The Boss said“老妹儿,吃得好下次再来啊“. The first attraction we visited was Chang Chun film studio. We got there by taxi because it was cheaper compared to SH. I talked a lot to my mom, then the driver said I didn’t speak mandarin correctly/properly. Maybe I didn’t speak with pronunciation “er” accent/ tone.