VIP Class Notes (Lily) [W]

Relationship is one of the most important things in our life. If we don’t have friends, we can’t live well. Good relationship can help people grow up quickly. You can attend a part-time work with friends together when you are a student. You can do homework with friends and cheer up with each other. Good friends can help you to learn how to keep a relationship. For example, I forgot to take my key in the midnight, and no one at home. I only can ask my girlfriend for help. She booked a room at the hotel immediately, and stayed with me whole night. So we need keep a closed relationship by act, not only 嘴上说说. We need pay attention to bed friends and stay away from them. I lent my closed friend two hundred yuan, but it was be half a year passed, she has not returned. I was not angry she didn’t returned, but(而是) she put some pictures about her daily for what she paid.

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Relationship is one of the most important things in our life. If we don’t have friends, we will be a loner. Good relationships can help people to mature quickly/sooner. You can do a part-time job with your friends together when you are a student. You can do homework with friends and cheer up with each other. Good friends can help you to learn how to keep a relationship. For example, I forgot to bring my key and no one was home at midnight. I could only ask my girl friend for help. She booked a room at the hotel immediately, and stayed with me for the whole night. In order to maintain a good relationship, we must help each other.  We need stay away from bad people. I lent my closed friend two hundred yuan, but it has already been half a year, she hasn’t returned the money. I was not angry that she didn’t return the money, but that she posted some pictures of what she bought.