VIP Class Notes (Lily) [W]

Vocabulary

1.script (noun)= 稿子
ex: Most news reporters can read the running script.
ex: For reality shows, people have to memorize their scripts.

2. draft＝ 草稿
ex: this is a draft copy, i will give you the final copy tomorrow.
ex: you can look at the draft first, I will revise it later.

3. murder (kill)= 谋
ex: she was pregnant and murdered her husband.

4. pregnant（adj）＝怀孕的
ex: You shouldn’t eat too much sweet things when you are pregnant.

5. diabetes （dai a BEE tees )= 糖尿病
ex: her husband has diabetes.

6. impolite (adj)= opposite of polite 不礼貌
ex: I didn’t see because it’s impolite to look at him.
ex: it’s impolite to look at mothers who are breastfeeding.
ex: It is impolite to eat snacks in the class.

7. polite (adj)= 礼貌的
ex: we should be polite to our nanny because she takes care of the baby.

I was an announcer when I was in junior high school. One day, whole students of grade about two thousands people went to the place that was named ‘Oriental Land’ at the second semester where 教官trained us. That was my second time I went to there. There were many different country apartments. I wanted to lived in Belgium apartment that I lived before. But Girls in our class lived in the American apartment in the end.
There was nothing especially things happened at the first day. I hardly ever had training because I stayed at studio room. When I ate breakfast next day, one girl come run to me hurried and told me that teachers asked me to meet her at once, they wanted let me to be a host of the party tonight. My friends who ate breakfast with me were so excited, but I know that was a trouble because not only our school，also another school was here, and two school would join the party together.
A boy of that school went to the theatre with me. We spend half an hour to write our own host draft then went to the theatre. Two teachers of that school makeup for her. I felt a little awkward because my teacher left me alone.
(the second part I will write next time)

Revised

I was an announcer when I was in junior high school. One day, all the students of grade 11, about two thousand people went to the place that was named ‘Oriental Land’ in the second semester for body training. where 教官trained us. That was my second time I went to there. There were many different country apartments. I wanted to lived in the Belgium apartment that I lived before. But the girls in our class (ended up living)/ lived in the American apartment in the end. 
Nothing special happened on the first day. I hardly trained because I stayed at the studio room. When I was having breakfast the next day, one girl ran to me and told me that teachers asked me to meet them at once, they wanted let me to be a MC of the party tonight. My friends who ate breakfast with me were so excited, but I knew that was a problem because not only would we have the party for our school, but another school was here, and two school would have the party together.
A boy of that school went to the stadium with me. We spent half an hour to write our own script before the party. Two teachers of that school put on makeup for him. I felt a little awkward because my teacher left me alone.
(the second part I will write the second part next time)