VIP Class Notes (Lily) [S/W]

Vocabulary

1.fart= booooo
ex: the elephants like to fart.

2. it stinks! = this smells bad
ex: the elephant’s poo stinks!
ex: my socks stink!

Describe an exciting trip that you had

3 months ago, I went to the SanYa. There are many trees and plants. There is very hot, many people wear the t-shirts. There are many kinds of animals like the birds, the fish, we go there by plane. I play in the zoo, the dolphins can perform. i see some many crazy animals like elephants. I go in it and it fart. It poo a lot. I go in two minutes and go out.

Revised

3 months ago, I went to the SanYa. There were many trees and plants. It was very hot, many people were wearing the t-shirts. There were many kinds of animals like the birds and the fish, we went there by plane. I played/visited in the zoo,and watched the dolphin’s show  . i saw some many crazy animals like elephants. I went in the area and it farted. It pooed a lot. I went in for in two minutes and got out.

I am nervous because I will go to teacher’s home

I’m disappointed when I can’t play games

The small fish are all scared of the shark

I’m devastated when I can go to the toilet.

Revised

I am nervous because I will go to the teacher’s home

I’m disappointed when I can’t play games

The small fish are all scared of the sharks

I’m devastated when I cannot go to the toilet.