VIP Class Notes (Lily) [S/W]

Homework

write about your day/experience at your mother-in-law’s.

Grammar

I was took–> I took

Vocabulary

1. hike/ go hiking= 爬山
ex: I went hiking with my ex-boyfriend and it was super tiring.
ex: I hate hiking so much because I hate walking.

2. license= 执照
ex: operating license
ex: teaching license
ex: license plate= 车牌
ex: you have to bid for a license plate in Shanghai.
ex: It’s very expensive to get a Shanghai license plate.

3. pop-ups= 弹出窗口
ex: I always close the pop-ups, no matter what they are.
ex: the pop-ups are valuable today because it’s double elevenths.

4. dishwasher= 洗碗机
ex: how often do you use the dishwasher?

5. red pack= 红包
ex: there are lots of red packs on TB today.

Speaking exercise

Maybe I will go to work next week, the process of my new job is almost ready. I was taking part of Double Eleventh promotion for almost 5 years. My job is trade marketing. Trade marketing is doing promotion online, especially Small platform and JD platform. This year is the most relaxing year. Without working stress, this year I used the least money. I just used 800.

My mother-in-law is a kindergarten headmaster, she is a very cute old woman. She feels happy everyday. Besides the kindergarten headmaster, she owns a flower store.

Revised

Maybe I will start working next week, the on-boarding process of my new job is almost ready. I took part in the Double Eleventh festival for almost 5 years. My job is about trade marketing. Trade marketing is doing promotions online, especially on Tmall platform and JD platform. This year is the most relaxing year. Without working stress, this year I used the least amount of money. I just used 800.

My mother-in-law is a kindergarten headmaster, she is a very cute and old woman. She feels happy everyday. Besides being/ working as the kindergarten headmaster, she also owns a flower shop.

Writing exercise

Comparing climbing mountains, I prefer lying on the beach more. However, because of my superstitious belief, I go to the Lingyin temple and the Putuo temple every year, which means I have to climb mountains twice a year… Last week my family went to the Putuo mountain, where is banned from driving by people themselves. The whole mountain is full of temples, unlucky, last week shuttle buses from temple to temple was too crowded to cancel, we had to use our feet all day long. It totally showed our sincerity, hoping Buddha saw that and bless us.

Revised

Compared to hiking climbing mountains, I prefer lying on the beach more. However, because of my superstitious belief, I go to the Lingyin temple and the Putuo temple every year, which means I have to hike twice a year… Last week my family went to the Putuo mountain, where the cars were banned from entering. The whole mountain was full of temples, unluckily, last week, the shuttle buses from temple to temple were too crowded and got canceled, we had to use our feet/we had to be on foot all day long. We really showed our sincerity, we hope Buddha sees it and will bless us.