VIP Class Notes (Lily) [S/R]

In the morning, Jack is fishing. At noon, the girl is buy fish.

Jack can fish in the ocean. Jack on the rock. He got many fish in the water.  An then, a girl buys fish. The girl have lunch. Jacky feel happy. The girl feel hungry.

Revised

In the morning, Jack is fishing. At noon, the girl is buying fish.

Jack can fish in the ocean. Jack is on the rock. He got many fish in the water.  And then, a girl buys fish. The girl has lunch. Jacky feel happy. The girl feels hungry.

One fine morning Bobby Squirrel was playing. The sun was shining, and he was very happy. He ran up and down trees. He ran along the ground. “I wish I could find something good to eat”, thought Bobby. Just then he heard the children coming along the street. It was time for school.

Bobby liked to see the children going to school. Sometimes they gave him nuts. Sometimes other good things fell out of their pockets. Body sat up on the ground and looked at the children. But they ran to school so fast that they did not see him. After the children had gone by, Bobby Squirrel saw something on the ground. He ran to see what it was. It was something round, it was something green.

“What is this round, green thing?” said Bobby. It is not a nut, it smells good, I will eat it, so he ate a little of it. It was very sweet and very good. He ate it all.

“Oh oh,” said Bobby Squirrel. “That green thing was good, maybe I can find another one” He looked along the ground and soon he found another one. I will take it home, he thought. I will ask Mother what it is. Away he ran to this home in a tree.

All the other squirrels wanted to see what Bobby had found. “It is just a green nut”, said one.