VIP Class Notes (Lily) [S]

Grammar

before saw this movie– >before seeing this movie

Vocabulary

1. cough =咳嗽
ex: I have a cough, I have been coughing all day.
ex: my son was coughing in the morning.

I give my son many homework and my parents said “he needs much more time to have a rest”, but I think he needs to learn 4 hours a day. I give him some homework, he needs to complete it the day. But my parents said he has black circle and doesn’t enough rest time. Last week, my parents took him to the doctor. Every summer, he needs to do this for three years. One doctor says “oh he has really big black circle.” My mother said he need to sleep earlier than now. He need to do the homework on 10 o’clock. After 10 o’clock, he will do some cleaning and go to bed. Before summer holiday, he always went to bed about 9 o’clock. I can do many things in this period. We need using this holiday to make many things. Now I cancelled some homework and he needs noon nap. When he can’t fall asleep, he says “let’s do some homework”. On weekends, I will sleep with him noon nap. At 2 o’clock, he didn’t fall asleep, I will ask him ,” do you want to sleep or do some homework?”, he will say “do homework”.

Revised

I give my son many homework and my parents said “he needs much more time to have a rest”, but I think he needs to learn for 4 hours a day. I give him some homework, he needs to complete it on the day. But my parents said he has black circles and doesn’t have enough rest time. Last week, my parents took him to the doctor. Every summer, he needs to do this for three years. One doctor says “oh he has really serious black circles.” My mother said he needs to sleep earlier than he does now. He needs to do the homework before 10 o’clock. After 10 o’clock, he will clean up after himself and go to bed. Before the summer holiday, he always went to bed at around 9 o’clock. I can do many things during this period. We need to use this holiday to the fullest. Now I cancelled some homework and he needs noon nap. When he can’t fall asleep, he says “let’s do some homework”. On weekends, I will sleep with him at noon. If he doesn’t fall asleep at 2, I will ask him ,” do you want to sleep or do some homework?”, he will say “do homework”.