VIP Class Notes (Lily) [S]

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Grammar

she disturbed all people around–> she disturbed everyone around her.

Vocabulary

1.braces= 牙套
ex: People usually wear braces when they’re in high school.

2. retainer= 固定器
ex: you must wear your retainer for two years.

3. bracelet (noun)= 手链
ex: do you like to wear bracelets?

Talk about something that annoys you.
why does it annoy you?
How do you react when someone does this?
Do you think this annoys other as well?

Thanks for the question. Think about my life, there are a lot of things to annoy me. But they are not a serious thing, all of them are more small issues. One of the most serious annoying thing is someone speak loud around me, or talking with someone using their telephone. When someone speak loud around me, I always keep far away from them, or look at them some minutes to warn them that they are annoying other people. I think speak loud in a public space is not a polite way for other people. They should realize that’s not a good manner.

Revised

Thanks for the question. As I reflect on my life, there are a lot of things that could annoy me. But they are not serious matters, all of them are just small/minor issues. One of the most serious annoying thing is when someone speaks loudly around me, or talks with someone on the phone. When people speak loudly around me, I always stay away from them, or look at them for a few minutes to warn them that they are disturbing other people. I think it’s impolite to speak loudly in a public area, they should realize the negative effects they bring to other people.

When I look around my belonging, I never have a thing more than 10 year for me. Among them, I think my retainer is most important for me at this moment . When I was 30 years old, I think my teeth are not beautiful for my face. Then I decided to straighten my teeth. My mother supported me, and then I was wearing for two years. One of the reason I think it is important for me is if I don’t wear it everyone, my teeth would be go back 2 years ago. It is easy to replace but if I bought a new one, I will pay for it a little expensive, so it is important for me.

Revised

When I look around my belongings, I realize I’ve never had anything for more than 10 years. Among them, I think my retainer is the most important belonging for me at this moment . When I was 30 years old, I thought my teeth could be corrected. Then I decided to straighten my teeth. My mother supported me, and I’ve been wearing it for two years. One of the reason I think it is important for me is that if I don’t wear it everyday, my teeth would be go back to how it looked 2 years ago. It is easy to replace but if I buy a new one, I will pay a higher price, so it is important for me.