VIP Class Notes (Lily) [S/W]

write about your trip to Boston

Vocabulary

1.lag= 很卡
ex: My computer is lagging, I can’t see the notes.
ex: Sorry you lagged, what did you just say?

2. intimidated = 被恐吓 被吓
ex: He was intimidated by the black man who asked him for money.

your trip to Boston
I think Boston is good place for studying, there are four famous universities in Boston. Harvard, MIT, Boston, UCL. I hope my son can go to MIT. I don’t want to come back to SH in Boston, but in NY I miss Shanghai. Boston is clean, and fewer people.

Revised

I think Boston is good place for studying, there are four famous universities in Boston: Harvard, MIT, Boston, UCL. I hope my son can go to MIT. I didn’t want to come back to SH when I was in Boston, but in NY I missed Shanghai. Boston is clean with fewer people.

I took the national entrance examination for graduate students on December 22 last year. It consists of two subjects, comprehensive and English, and every test lasts 3 hours.
I got a 67 out of 100. Although it is not a good score, it is pretty good for my English level. When I does reading comprehension there was many set phrase and idioms, it made me headache. Definitely, that’s what it means that I do not like it. I also must distinguish between comma-separated sentences which is main clauses.
After the exam, I watched basketball game between Lakers and Rockets with my classmates. Tracy got 2 points from scoring a goal.

Revised

I took the national entrance examination for graduate students on December 22 last year. It consists of two subjects, comprehensive and English, and every test lasts 3 hours.
I got a 67 out of 100. Although it is not a good score, it is pretty good for my English level. When I did the reading comprehension, there were many phrases and idioms, I got a headache. Definitely, that’s what it means that I did not like it. I also must distinguish the comma-separated sentences from the main clauses.
After the exam, I watched the basketball game between Lakers and Rockets with my classmates. Tracy got 2 points from scoring a goal.