VIP Class Notes (Lily) [S + W]

Homework

https://www.ielts-mentor.com/reading-sample/academic-reading

Vocabulary

1.chill= relaxed
ex: I like my job because it’s very chilled.
ex: I’m just chilling in IAPM, I have nothing to do, let’s chill together.

2.newbie/noob (more stupid)= someone new in an industry, or just started doing something 新手 èœé¸Ÿ
ex: I am a newbie in golf.

3. lol = laugh out loud hahahaha
ex: “lol me too”

Speaking exercise

now our country said English is not important, so you do not let children learn too much, in public school, they will have less lessons. My friend said parents have to do more lessons out of school because everyone knows English is very important. In a lot of developed country, English is language for working and for life, the reason why you do not need English more is the Japanese people win the Noble Prize, but they did not speak English. That’s why we are normal people, we have to learn more, then we can learn more opportunity. She said she have to send her son to have English classes after class, because school will not teach too much. I’m not sure it started the process now.

Revised

now the government believes that English is not as important, so the schools do not let the children learn too much, in public schools, they will have fewer lessons/classes. My friend said parents have to do bring their kids to take lessons out of school because everyone knows English is very important. In a lot of developed countries, English is the main language for working and for life, the reason why the government believes you do not need English more is because the Japanese people who won the Noble Prize, but they did not speak English. As normal people, we have to learn more, then we can have more opportunities. She said she has to send her son to have English classes after class, because the school will not teach too much. I’m not sure when will be policy start. 

Writing exercise

Millennials refer to the young generation who were born around year 2000. People of this generation are pay too much attention to the material life. Recently there are a lot of reports regarding the girls in university in china who borrow money with their naked pictures instead of an agreement of loan.As a fact ,similar things happened all over the world,. one report said a lot of students ,most of them are girls,including about 1000 girls from University of Cambridge registered on a U.S.website as sugar babies and dated with sugar daddies who are around 45 years at average in order to get financial support.The writer said only part of those girls make money by this way to pay the tuition fees as the fees are not affordable for many familes,but most of them are just for luxury lifestyle.This is a worrying stiuation. Even if these students complete their college courses,,how could we trust that they would make society better.

Revised

Millennials refer to the young generation who were born around the year 2000. People of this generation are more materialistic. Recently there are a lot of reports regarding the girls in university in china who borrow money with their naked pictures instead of an agreement of loan. In fact, similar things happens all over the world,. one report said a lot of students, mainly girls ,including about 1000 girls from University of Cambridge registered on a U.S.website as sugar babies and dated with sugar daddies who are around 45 years at average in order to get financial support.The writer said only part of those girls make money by this way to pay the tuition fees as the fees are not affordable in many familes,but most of them are just seeking for the luxury lifestyle.This is a troublesome stiuation. Even if these students complete their college degree,,how could we trust that they would make the society better./ how can we put the future into their hands.Â