VIP Class Notes (Lily) [R/W]

watch Hell’s Kitchen

worked on IELTS listening and reading

https://www.ielts.org/-/media/pdfs/115019_general_training_reading_sample_task_-_flow-chart_completion.ashx?la=en

The newspaper production process has come a long way from the old days when the paper was written, edited, typeset and ultimately printed in one building with the journalists working on the upper floors and the printing presses going on the ground floor. These days the editor, subeditors and journalists who put the paper together are likely to find themselves in a totally different building or maybe even in a different city. This is the situation which now prevails in Sydney. The daily paper is compiled at the editorial headquarters, known as the prepress centre, in the heart of the city, but printed far away in the suburbs at the printing centre. Here human beings are in the minority as much of the work is done by automated machines controlled by computers.

I would like to mention that having an unbalanced diet for a long time can lead to a lot of body problems, both mentally and physically. For example, it can cause diseases such as malnutrition if our body cannot get enough nutritions. Unbalanced diets violate the nature regular of our body. We need multiple of foods to keep our body strong, if we can’t do that, we could get hypo-immunity.

More importantly, if we’re not healthy, we don’t have enough energy to support our body to move. And then we have to see the doctor, to take pills,to keep stay in bed. In the course of time, we could be depressive. And we must spend money for sickness, our family members have to take care of us. All these problems are caused by unbalanced diets, so it’s really bad.

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I would like to mention that having a long-term/prolonged unbalanced diet for a long time can lead to a lot of body problems, both mentally and physically. For example, it can cause diseases such as malnutrition if our body do not have sufficient nutrients. Unbalanced diets violate the nature regular of our body. We need multiple kinds of foods to keep our body strong, if we can’t do that, we could get hypo-immunity.

More importantly, if we’re not healthy, we don’t have enough energy to support our physical moves. And then we have to see the doctor, to take pills and keep stay in bed. In the course of time, we could be depressed/ develop emotional disorders. And we must spend money for our illness, our family members have to take care of us. All these problems are caused by/related to unbalanced diets, so it’s really bad.