VIP Class Notes (Lily) [R/W]
Reading
On Richard’s 7th birthday, he had a party at home. His mother made pizza and his father baked a cake. Richard’s parents gave him a new dog. Richard’s friends loved his birthday party because they played with his new dog, but Richard was upset because his mother didn’t give the dog any cake to eat.
On Richard’s 10th birthday, he went to the beach with his friends. They swam at the beach, and they went to a restaurant to eat. Richard’s friends liked his birthday party, but Richard was upset because he didn’t like his present. His friends gave him a wallet, but he wanted a baseball.
On Richard’s 13th birthday, he had a picnic. His mother cooked hot dogs and hamburgers. They ate delicious food and played baseball. All of his friends enjoyed his birthday party but Richard was upset because the girls didn’t talk to him.
On Richard’s 16th birthday, he didn’t have a party. He went dancing with his girlfriend. and he had a wonderful time.His friends didn’t give him presents and his parents didn’t cook. But Richard wasn’t upset because he danced with his girlfriend all night.
Writing exercise
On my 10 years birthday, my mother bought a bicycle but it’s small. I was very happy. On my 11 years birthday, my friends came in a restaurant, had a rest, we ware very happy.
Revised
On my 10th birthday, my mother bought a bicycle but it was small. I was very happy. On my 11th birthday, my friends and I had lunch in a restaurant, we had a rest and we were very happy.
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