VIP Class Notes (Lily) [R/W]

Reading

There is a bike on the roof of the car
I am walking with my dad
There is a beehive in the tree.
The bees are flying around the hive
I am waving at my friend
There are some apples in the tree
The sun is shining in the sky.

Writing

I am Henry.
my mom is fat.
my dad is thin,
my mom and dad is family.
Lily is happy.

Revised

I am Henry.
my mom is fat.
my dad is thin,
my mom and dad are a family.
Lily is happy.