VIP Class Notes (Li)

Today we focused on:

A short story

Things to consider:

theme, setting, protagonist (main character), the problem, how to solve it

Vocabulary

protagonist: the main character

eg. Who is the protagonist in Harry Potter.

antagonist: arch enemy/the big bad guy

eg. When I watch movies, I usually prefer the antagonist.

compact: small and tight

eg. She decided to buy a compact car.

projector: a device you can use to show films or images on a wall

Grammar

in the whole Sunday – on the whole Sunday

he didn’t got shot – he didn’t get shot

first, your parents should tell teacher – first your parents should tell the teachers

at there – over there

Writing

There is a Jedi Master called Yoda and Luke Skywalker is his student. Yoda trained Luke for years and years, but Yoda died at last. Luke is very sad but he decided to leave this small planet. First, he went to Geonosis and he met some Geonosisien. They are guards and they try to kill Luke. Geonosisien is an insect-like human which armed with powerful blaster. Luke light up his green lightsaber and destroyed the evil guards. After that, he met a spaceship merchant and bought a small and light one. He flew to the death star. The death star is created by human. It is very like a small planet and it has a powerful weapon, a huge laser cannon that can destroy a whole planet. He almost reached the death star but some Tie fighters came and they shoot some missiles at Luke’s spaceship. Luke first ducked all the missiles and fought back. His laser bullets destroyed two enemies’ spaceship at once. But, his spaceship also got destroyed. He landed on the death star and no one where he went. The end.

Revised: 

There is a Jedi Master called Yoda and Luke Skywalker is his student. Yoda trained Luke for years and years/many years, but Yoda died at last. Luke is very sad but he decided to leave/depart from this small planet. First, he went to Geonosis and he met some Geonosians. They are guards and they try to kill Luke. Geonosians are an insect-like human who are armed with powerful blasters. Luke lighted up his green lightsaber and destroyed the evil guards. After that, he met a spaceship merchant and bought a small and light/compact one. Then, he flew to the death star. The death star is created by humans. It is very much like/is a small planet and it has a powerful weapon, a huge laser cannon that can destroy a whole planet. He almost reached the death star but some Tie fighters came and they shot some missiles at Luke’s spaceship. Luke first ducked all the missiles and fought back. His laser bullets destroyed two enemies’ spaceship at once. But, his spaceship also was destroyed. He landed on the death star and no one knows his whereabouts/ where he went. The end.