VIP Class Notes (Li)

Vocabulary

broth – a thin soup

ex. hotpot broth

chicken/beef/vegetable stock

Writing exercise

What type of new technology would you like to be invented?

In my opinion, the imagination on-line game with mental control is the what I want to be invented, like the movie, Ready Player One.

Due to imbalance wealth distribution, most people in the world be placed restrictions on their background. But in the online game, origin is same. Everyone starts to be novice. If someone is diligent, his or her life will better than lazy guys. The reason is also some people are addicted to the online game.

Secondly, the mental control online game can help some people in coma. These people need some factors to stimulate their brain. If a imagination online game be invented, researchers can connect these patients in the online game, these people may have some hope to wake up.

If use the technology in education field, it may be a nightmare for students. Every night, students may go to the online game to practice and do their homework. If study pressure is high in future, students may have not enough time to have their entertainment.

Revised: 

In my opinion, using your mind to control an online game is what I want to be invented, like the movie, Ready Player One.

Due to the imbalance of wealth distribution, most people around the world are limited by their circumstances. But, for online games, everyone is the same. Everyone starts as a novice. If someone is diligent, his or her life will better than the lazy guys. The reason is also some people are addicted to online games.

Secondly, mind control (online) games can help some people that are in a coma. These people need some methods to stimulate their brain. If an imaginary online game can be invented, researchers can connect these patients online then these people may have some hope to wake up in the future. 

If we use this technology in education, it may be a nightmare for students. Every night, students may log-on  the online game to practice and do their homework. If the pressure to study is high in the future, students may not have enough time to relax.Â