VIP Class Notes (Li) [S]

My hometown is a small city. It is clean and have lots of people. The education is very famous in my hometown. I lived in my hometown for 15 years. I love my hometown. Every year I go back to my hometown for some days.

I think the times I spent with my family and my friends is the most interesting part. My family give me the best education and life when I was little. So I study well and I have lots of best friends from my middle school and my high school. We study together and we have a lot of happy times after classes. So I think it is the good memory for me of my hometown and also it is a good experience for me.

Most of all the people from my hometown like to choose to be teachers or workers in factory. Some people want to be the waiters because the education in my hometown is very famous so the people in my hometown very respect teachers. And every year there will be lots of new graduate students come back to my hometown to be teachers or experts in factory. We also have lots of famous factory in my hometown. They have good benefit for my country.

I think it is a good place to live because it is not too busy for people. People who live there always feel happiest and peaceful. They do their work for eight hours one day. And the other times they can enjoy their personal lives. They can do lots of things for interesting and to enhance theirselves.

Revised: 

My hometown is a small city. It is clean and has lots of people. The education It is very famous for education in my hometown. I lived in my hometown for 15 years and I love it my hometown. Every year I go back to my hometown for some days.

I think that the most interesting part is  the times I spent with my family and my friends is the most interesting part. My family give gave/provided me with the best education and life when I was little. So I studied well and I have lots of best friends from my middle school and my high school. We studied together and we have a lot of happy times after classes. So I think it is the they were good memories for me of my hometown and also it is a good experience for me.

Most of all the people from my hometown like to choose to be teachers or workers in factories. Some people want to be the waiters because the education in my hometown is very famous so the people in my hometown very respect their teachers. And every year there will be lots of new graduate students who come back to my hometown to be teachers or experts in the factories. We also have lots of famous factories in my hometown. They have good benefit for my country.

I think it is a good place to live because it is not too busy for with people. People who live there always feel happy and peaceful. They do their work for eight hours one a day. And the Other times, they can enjoy their personal lives. They can do lots of interesting things for interesting and to enhance theirselves. themselves. 

I live in a apartment in Shanghai. My university provide my apartment for two years but I don’t like this style of living. Because the space is not good. I have fall down from the second floor for two times. I feel bad. And the window is very big but the wind cannot blew into my room when I close the door.

For two years from 2017 to now. Maybe I will leave from here after December.

To live there have a good thing. It is nearly to my university. Everyday I go to my university just use twenty minutes. Sometimes I go there by bicycle and sometimes by subway. The way from my apartment to my university is beautiful, have a good scenery, especially in autumn because the air smells sweet.

I want to live in a big space room regardless of the 裝修. I just need a table and a chair. If there is a dog I think that will perfect for me. I can live there everyday and paint everyday. I think it’s the most suitable living for me.

Revised: 

I live in an apartment in Shanghai. My university provided my apartment for two years but I don’t like this style of living. Because space is not good is limited. I have fallen down from the second floor for two times/twice. I feel bad. And The window is very big but the wind cannot blew blow into my room when I close the door.

For two years from 2017 to till now/2019. Maybe I will leave from here after December.

To Living there has a one good thing. It is nearly to  my university. Everyday I go take only twenty minutes to go to my university. just use twenty minutes. Sometimes I go there by bicycle and sometimes by subway. The way from my apartment to my university is beautiful, have has a good scenery, especially in autumn because the air smells sweet.

I want to live in a big space room regardless of the 裝修 refurbishment. I just need a table and a chair. If there is a dog I think that will be perfect for me. I can live there everyday and paint everyday. I think it’s the most suitable living for me.

Grammar

morning till night – morning till late/midnight 

I don’t like to competive – I don’t like to compete 

I can’t feel the sincere – I can’t feel the sincerity