VIP Class Notes (Li)

Write about what you saw today.

Vocabulary

flight attendant – somebody who works on a plane serving food and drinks

explode – to blow up

ex. The engine exploded causing the plane to crash on the mountain.

take-off – when a plane leaves the ground

ex. Flight attendants have to check that the plane is ready for take-off.

sth is on fire/starts burning/catches fire

cockpit – a small room where the pilot sits on the plane

plenty – a lot/many

ex. We’ve got plenty of food in the fridge.

There is a model of a village and there are a lot of old bowls and spoons and lots of old things.

There is a model of a village and there are a lots of old bowls, spoons and lots of old things.

I interested in a museum. There are a lot of models of ships in the museum. There are lots of boats like the real one.

I am interested in/enjoyed visiting a museum. There are a lot/plenty of model ships in the museum. There are lots of boats that look like the real ones.

work didn’t well

didn’t work well 

One of the engines explode

One of the engines exploded  

Mr Bean wanted to buy a cup but he didn’t have enough money to buy it. Just then, he saw a poster about a fun fair and he go to the fun fair. He saw a shop. If he win, he could get some money. Then, Mr Bean saw some stick on the ground. If you throw a ball, it wouldn’t put down. The shop manager saw him and Mr Bean ran away. The manager ran after him and fall down. Mr Bean stole 10 pounds and he used the 10 pounds to buy two cups.

Revised: 

Mr Bean wanted to buy a cup but he didn’t have enough money to buy it. Just then, he saw a poster about a fun fair so he went to the fun fair. He saw a shop. If he won, he could receive/earn some money. Then, Mr Bean saw some sticks stuck to the ground. If you threw a ball at the stick, it won’t fall. The shop manager saw him and Mr Bean ran away. The manager ran after him and fell down. Mr Bean stole 10 pounds and he used the 10 pounds to buy two cups.

One day, Mr Bean wanted to go on a trip to the beach. But when he got to the hotel, a little girl wanted to get his teddy and just then, the little girl’s dad took her to their room. She was very angry. When Mr Bean was sitting on the beach, the little girl came again. At that moment, Mr Bean saw her and ran away. After that, Mr bean went to the restaurant to have lunch. But at that time, she took the teddy away and brought it to the amusement park. At last, the little girl played with the bumper car with the teddy and her dad. In the end, Mr Bean drove a bumper car and crashed onto the little girl’s car. Mr Bean took his teddy back and the little girl and her father crashed in the sea.

Revised: 

One day, Mr Bean wanted to go on a trip to the beach. But when he got to the hotel, a little girl wanted to play with his teddy and just then, the little girl’s dad took her to their room. She was very angry. When Mr Bean was sitting on the beach, the little girl came again. At that moment, Mr Bean saw her and ran away. After that, Mr bean went to the restaurant to have lunch. But at that time, she took/stole the teddy away and brought it to the amusement park. At last, the little girl played with the bumper car with the teddy and her dad. In the end, Mr Bean drove a bumper car and crashed onto the little girl’s car. Mr Bean took his teddy back and the little girl and her father crashed into the sea.