VIP Class Notes (Li)[S/W]

Vocabulary

6:30 pm/in the evening 

a breath of fresh air -a change from the usual

ingredients –

search up on (app/internet/catalogue) – to look for sth

if they’re sponsored to write/review the product – to get paid for promoting a product/writing about a product

Are you a decisive(indecisive) person? – Can you make decisions easily?

impulse buyer/shop impulsively – to buy without considering

stock up – buy in advance

ex. Now is a good time to stock up on skincare products.

good value/bargain – price is good

ex. Double 11 promotions are good value.

Grammar

-ed adj 

brand -> branded

Normally we are start at 9:30

You maybe don’t need them but they can breed some new fresh.

I will check the ingredients and watch some XHS.

I won’t buy things immediately even I like that.

Before I was a person buy things impulsively.

I just think I guilt.

They think the product will sold out.

Revised: 

Normally we start at 9:30 am/in the morning. 

Maybe you don’t need them but they can be a breath of fresh air. 

I will check the ingredients and search up on XHS.

I won’t buy things immediately even if I like them.

Before I was a person who shops impulsively/I was an impulsive shopper. 

I just felt guilty. 

They think the product will be sold out/will sell out. 

The brand generally show you some message about their products, which helps me to know the specialties of theirs goods and make fast decision if i should buy them .For example, some brands are well-known for good quality and long history, and others are popular because of their stylish and new design. When you want to buy something, as the brand image is imputed to your mind, you can start you shopping research sooner without confusion about where can you get them.

Meanwhile, since increasing number of people pay more attention to not only the brand name but also the quality of the products and after-services , lots of brand is bending their efforts to increase their products and services . Compared to the no-brand products, you probably can avoid being cheated by low price ,when you buy a brand product.Furthermore, you can get good after-service at brand store, such as refund, exchange, fix and maintenance. those kind of services enable you buy the right one that really fits you and you can use for a longer time. In a way, buying a brand products with higher price means saving money.

With the development of the manufacture, lots of brand is born and come to the market, finding out a reasonable-priced brand is a good way to save your time spent on shopping and make a right decision.

Revised: 

The brand generally shows you/advertises some message about their products, which helps me to understand what’s unique about their products and make fast decisions when choosing if I want to buy them. For example, some brands are well-known for good quality and long history, and others are popular because of their stylish and new/contemporary designs. When you want to buy something, you can start researching sooner if a brand’s image is clear in your mind/made an impression to you and you will know where to buy the product.

Meanwhile, since an increasing number of people pay more attention to the brand name and also product quality and after-sales services, many brands are increasing their efforts to improve their products and services. Compared to the no-brand products, you can avoid being cheated by lower prices, when you buy a branded product. Furthermore, you can get good after-sales service at the brand’s store. These services enable you to buy a suitable one and you can use it for a longer time. In a way, buying branded products with higher price means saving money.

With increasing manufacturing development, lots of brands are created/introduced to the market. Choosing a reasonably-priced brand is a good way to save time spent on shopping and make the right decision.

* Try to cut down on your sentences – too long!

* Try to use conjunctions or connectives instead of commas

*Less details – don’t always include every single detail

* use the plural form when you provide general information