VIP Class Notes (Li)

Vocabulary

collide: to hit something violently

Writing

Mr Bean was in a park. He went there by car. He was playing with his remote controlled plane. and at plane he placed his teddy bear, and it was flying, so Mr Bean was excited. Suddenly appeared a magpie and landed over his car. The bird saw to shine his keys and that catch the bird’s attention and it wanted to get it. Normally, this kind of birds are very clever. so, the magpie tried and tried removed these keys from car’s trunk of door look.

Mr Bean realised but he can’t to stop the plane and scare away the bird, both at the same time. Finally magpie got them. Mr Bean continued keeping the plane on the air, and in this moment he comes up with a great idea smile and tried to hit with his plane to bird. The magpie was scared seeing how a plane was chasing him, and it flew and flew as fast as possible, but finally both of them crossed against the tree.

Mr Bean approached to a tree and the bird fell for a moment, it didn’t move and Mr Bean thought that bird died, immediately he got sad, but no, it moved a little bit and Mr Bean smile again. The Bird tried to fly but it can’t it seemed dizzy. He thought what to do with that situation, and then he took the plane’s box, made a hole in a box, put inside the bird. When he was about to leave, a piece of plane fell from the tree and he could see his teddy bear was in a nest, so he climbed the tree for to catch it. When he was there, he saw in the nest a crown and he catched it too. After that he back home.

Revised: 

Mr Bean went to a park. He went there by car. He was playing with his remote control plane. he placed his teddy bear on the plane, and it started flying, so Mr Bean was excited. Suddenly, a magpie appeared and landed on his car. The bird saw his shiny keys and that caught the bird’s attention so it wanted to get it. Normally, this kind of bird is very clever. so, it tried several times to remove these keys from the car’s trunk look.

Mr Bean realised, but he can’t stop the plane and scare away the bird both at the same time. Finally, magpie got the keys. Then, Mr Bean continued flying the plane on the air, and at this moment he comes up with a great idea and smiles. He tried to hit the bird with his plane. The magpie was scared after seeing a plane was chasing it, and it flew and flew as fast as possible. But, finally, both of them collided against a tree.

Mr Bean approached the tree and the bird fell. For a moment, it didn’t move and Mr Bean thought that the bird died. Immediately, he became sad, but then, it started moving a little bit and Mr Bean smiled again. The Bird tried to fly but it couldn’t because it seemed dizzy. He thought what to do about the situation, and he decided to take the plane’s box and made a hole in it, to put the bird inside. When he was about to leave, a piece of the plane fell from the tree and he could see his teddy bear was in a nest. So, he climbed the tree to catch it. When he was there, he found a crown in the nest and he took it too. After that, he went back home.