VIP Class Notes (Kyle) (W)

Talking about other people.

Original:

My rocket is very big and tall. It can fly very good. But it flys slowly. My rocket has four machines move because I hope that it can run on the land. And it can swim in the sea because I like many fish. My rocket can fly in the sky very good, run on the land very good and swim in the sea very good too. I like my rocket.

Corrected :

My rocket is very big/huge and tall/impressive. It can fly very good well. But it flys/ flies slowly. My rocket has four engines/machines move because I hope that it can run on the land. And it can swim in the sea because I like to see many fish. My rocket can fly in the sky very good well, run on the land very good well and swim in the sea very good well too. I like my rocket. My rocket is awesome.

It can fly very good well —–> good is used for Nouns, well for Verbs.

Can you run very well? —-> I can run very well.

Is your school is good.—–> Yes, my school is good.

Why does it fly slowly? Because it is fat  very heavy. My rocket is heavy. 

When you went to the moon, what did you see? I saw the moon, sun and stars.

Have you ever heard of the Millenium Falcon? No. The fastest rocket in the galaxy.

Vocabulary

Galaxy = outer space, where the Earth, Sun and Moon live.

machines= We are not machines! We are people. Is my computer a machine? Yes, your computer is a machine.

Machines use electrical power. My rocket uses fuel.

He took pictures —-> to take a picture with a camera

What is the main idea ?

main idea 主要想法

They went to the moon and so we can also go there to explore. 

to challenge = 挑战

I challenge you to play this game. Trogdor the Burninator.

The Dragon( leunge) is named Trogdor. Trogdor can make fire. You need to stomp the

to flip – to go upside down

Do you want to play the flippy hands game?