VIP Class Notes (Kyle) (S,R,W)
Grammar
REPEAT THE QUESTION : you are saying the questions sdrawkcab backwards
- What did you do this weekend? During the weekend….
- What do you talk about with your friends? My friends and are usually talking about / usually talk about it
- What did you learn in Biology class this semester? During
theBiology class this semester I learned …. - What did you Grandmother prepare for dinner on last Tuesday evening? On
thelast Tuesday evening my Grandma prepared for dinner … - What is favorite food that you like to eat on your Birthday ? On my Birthday my favorite food that I like to eat
- Where would you go if you could go anywhere in the world ? If I could go anywhere in the world I would go to …
- What sort of career would you like to have when you are older? When I am older the sort of career that I would like have would be….
- Where do you envision yourself studying at the University level of your education? At the University level of my education I envision myself studying at …..
HENRY’S ANSWERS: Uncorrected
- What did you do this weekend? During the weekend I have my lesson.
- What do you talk about with your friends? My friends and are usually talking about / usually talk about our school life and studying.
- What did you learn in Biology class this semester? During
theBiology class this semester I learned …. - What did you Grandmother prepare for dinner on last Tuesday evening? On
thelast Tuesday evening my Grandma prepared the chicken and a lettuce salad for dinner. - What is favorite food that you like to eat on your Birthday ? On my Birthday my favorite food that I like to eat the birthday cake and some fish.
- Where would you go if you could go anywhere in the world ? If I could go anywhere in the world I would go to Norway because there is beautiful view there
- What sort of career would you like to have when you are older? When I am older the sort of career that I would like have would be astronaut because I think this job is rewarding and challenging ,and I want
- Where do you envision yourself studying at the University level of your education? At the University level of my education I envision myself studying at …..
Speaking exercise
We like to play basketball and chatting together. We chat about school life and our studies. On the weekend I have lessons.
Original Version
During PE Class we watched movie. The movie was about, I don’t what his job was in English. I think he is a young man. I can’t explain it is too difficult to. We saw the black cloud when the storm coming and the rain start. Wind. I saw the lightening from the cloud and after a few seconds I heard thunder. My school is in Jingan area. The Lightening was maybe 6 or 7 km away. Everybody was inside the school. When I came to Smart English, the storm stopped.
Corrected Version:
During PE Class we watched a movie. I don’t know what the movie was really about because we only watched it for 40 minutes. I think the main character was a young man. I can’t explain the plot, because we only watched part of the movie. We watched a movie because there was a storm during our school hours today. We saw a big black cloud when the storm coming and the rain started. There was also a lot of wind but not at our school. I saw the lightening from the cloud and after a few seconds I heard thunder. My school is in Jingan area. The Lightening was maybe 6 or 7 km away. Everybody was inside the school. When I came to Smart English, the storm had stopped.
Vocabulary
the main character
the Plot = Story
Action = lots of things happening, busy,
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