VIP Class Notes (Kyle) (S,R,W)

Grammar

REPEAT THE QUESTION : you are saying the questions sdrawkcab backwards 

  1. What did you do this weekend? During the weekend….
  2. What do you talk about with your friends? My friends and are usually talking about / usually talk about it
  3. What did you learn in Biology class this semester? During the Biology class this semester I learned ….
  4. What did you Grandmother prepare for dinner on last Tuesday evening? On the  last Tuesday evening my Grandma prepared for dinner …
  5. What is favorite food that you like to eat on your Birthday ? On my Birthday my favorite food that I like to eat
  6. Where would you go if you could go anywhere in the world ? If I could go anywhere in the world I would go to …
  7. What sort of career would you like to have when you are older?  When I am older the sort of career that I would like have would be….
  8. Where do you envision yourself studying at the University level of your education? At the University level of my education I envision myself studying at …..

    HENRY’S ANSWERS: Uncorrected

  1. What did you do this weekend? During the weekend I have my lesson.
  2. What do you talk about with your friends? My friends and are usually talking about / usually talk about our school life and studying.
  3. What did you learn in Biology class this semester? During the Biology class this semester I learned ….
  4. What did you Grandmother prepare for dinner on last Tuesday evening? On the  last Tuesday evening my Grandma prepared the chicken and a lettuce salad for dinner.
  5. What is favorite food that you like to eat on your Birthday ? On my Birthday my favorite food that I like to eat the birthday cake and some fish.
  6. Where would you go if you could go anywhere in the world ? If I could go anywhere in the world I would go to Norway because there is beautiful view there
  7. What sort of career would you like to have when you are older?  When I am older the sort of career that I would like have would be astronaut because I think this job is rewarding and challenging ,and I want
  8. Where do you envision yourself studying at the University level of your education? At the University level of my education I envision myself studying at …..

Speaking exercise

We like to play basketball  and chatting together. We chat about school life and our studies. On the weekend I have lessons.

Original Version

During PE Class we watched movie. The movie was about, I don’t what his job was in English. I think he is a young man. I can’t explain it is too difficult to. We saw the black cloud when the storm coming and the rain start. Wind. I saw the lightening from the cloud and after a few seconds I heard thunder. My school is in Jingan area. The Lightening was maybe 6 or 7 km away. Everybody was inside the school. When I came to Smart English, the storm stopped.

Corrected Version: 

During PE Class we watched a movie. I don’t know what the movie was really about because we only watched it for 40 minutes. I think the main character was a young man. I can’t explain the plot, because we only watched part of the movie. We watched a movie because there was a storm during our school hours today. We saw a big black cloud when the storm coming and the rain started. There was also a lot of wind but not at our school. I saw the lightening from the cloud and after a few seconds I heard thunder. My school is in Jingan area. The Lightening was maybe 6 or 7 km away. Everybody was inside the school. When I came to Smart English, the storm had stopped.


Vocabulary

the main character

the Plot = Story

Action = lots of things happening, busy,