VIP Class Notes (Kyle) (S)

Write a story about visiting your Aunt in Sichuan province.

Vocabulary

one score —-> a goal

My soccer team scored a goal. The other team didn’t score any goals, so we won the match 1-0 (one to zero).

The final score = the score of both teams at the End of the game 1-1 (one-to-one)

You gotta = you need to

Something special = A unique thing that happened, interesting event

goal keeper / goalie / keeper = the person who can use his hands during the match in order to defend the goal, he can’t leave the goal box

My position was the goal keeper. 

to score a goal ––>  得分

Our team scored one goal.

Original Version 原始版本: 

Today at school, we have a football match. Our team scored a goal and also the other team score a goal. Their team scored first and we scored second. When they were attacking us , one of the other teams players kick the ball into the goal and I kick the ball out of the goal and I didn’t see the other player and this guy kicked the ball back into the goal.

When our team was attacking, our best player kicked across a long distance of the field. The other team’s keeper kicked the ball but didn’t get it. So the ball went into the net and we made a goal.

We played soccer together for 20 minutes to 30 minutes during the gym class time. The game ended in tie.

Corrected Version 更正版本:

Today at school, we had a football match—> I played in a football match with my classmates. My position was the goal keeper. Our team scored a goal and also the other team scored a goal. Their team scored first and we scored second. While they were attacking us, one of the other team‘s players kicked the ball into the goal and I kicked the ball out of the goal and but I didn’t see the other player who then kicked the ball back into the goal.

While our team was attacking, our best player kicked the ball across a long distance of the field. The other team’s keeper jumped to get the ball but didn’t get it. So the ball went into the net and we made a goal.

Everyone played soccer together for 20 minutes to 30 minutes during gym class time. The game ended in a tie 1-1.

Grammar

While they were attacking us—-> over a period of time “while…… attacking” 

kicked —-> xian zai, Happened at One Time

During  the _______ = a time period

During the soccer match today, we had fun.

During the 1990s, I was a kid and I was playing soccer.