VIP Class Notes (Kyle) [W]

Rewrite the Story of your Wedding Day with our changes.

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Original Version:

My wedding
Two years ago I had a beautiful day. In that day we celebrated our wedding.
During this time I was the happier women. I felt floating like if nothing were real, as in a fairytale.
The celebration was in Madrid Spain,a little far to city center. A small castle was where we meeting. There, my family and friends enjoyed an afternoon and night full magical, specially for me it was like that.
All things was perfect I think, food and drink was delicious, except the ceremony was a bit longer that normal and some of the guests don’t believe in God, sorry for them.
That days are awesome but unfortunately then are unrepeatable
I don’t know if every women feel same, but I felt wonderfully.
Thank you my dear to choice me and want share your life to my side for long time.

Edited / Corrected Version: 

My Wedding Day
Two years ago I had/experienced such a beautiful day. On that day we celebrated our wedding.
During this time I was the happiest women (alive). I felt like floating like as if nothing was real, like/as in a fairytale.
The celebration was/occurred in Madrid Spain, a little far from the city center. We met in a small castle for our ceremony/wedding. There, my family and friends enjoyed an afternoon and a night full of magic, and especially for me it felt like that.
All things were perfect I think, the food and drink was immaculate/fantastic/delicious. but/except the ceremony was a bit longer than normal and some of the guests don’t/didn’t believe in God, so sorry for them –> so for them time was passing a little bit slower than it was for me.
Those  days were awesome but unfortunately they are unrepeatable. I am happy to reflect on the memories.  
I don’t know if every women feels same on her wedding day, but I felt absolutely wonderful.
Thank you my dear for choosing me and want share your life to my side for long time.

Vocabulary

My Wedding Day = A Summary, a short description, sounds more complete

such = so much! A great amount!

the happiest woman alive = a special phrase, only for women, to express great gratitude and happiness/joy

Con paciencia, perseverancia y tengo un premio… Patience, perseverance, and I have/earn/win the prize.

to occur – to take place/time in, to happen in a place/time

eg. The event occurred in Madrid, Spain.

immaculate – perfect, there was no problem, spectacular, very special, very well arranged,

but/except – great for speaking, to include a vocal pause!

the Father = el Padre , the religious authority

to choose, choosing = verb , a choice = noun

Grammar

*** To Stay in the Verb Tense****

big/happy = Adjective

bigger/ happier =  Comparative  Adjective

biggest/happiest = the Superlative Adjective

ex. A cat is bigger than a hamster, but the dog is the biggest domestic animal.

Adverbs = absolutely 

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ate vs. took some medicine

migraine

self-care, taking care of myself , selfish

Younger generations can …. learn things differently…

The Soviet Union- and the USA

Brain/ doesn’t develop the skills