VIP Class Notes (Jesse) [W / S]

Write a diary about something you did at work recently (eg. a meeting). What happened, how did you organise it, and why was it successful?

Focus: sentence logic. Make sure every part of every sentence is complete.

Vocabulary

in a rush / in a hurry
eg. I was in a hurry when I wrote that email
eg.2 I wrote that email in a rush

they’re a little bit different / they’re similar

this is different to that
this is similar to that

dash… hyphen –
slash /

depending on your decision
based on / according to 

enclosed – packages / boxed / things with sth inside
included – everything else

revise / revision 

i had been to switzerland for 3 times because i surrounded the international school of switzerland area. All of the school is international but i choosed this schools reason (the reason i choosed this school), the first is it is nearby the germany, they normally use the german. i should be let her to learn german because i want her to get into the german university and the school location is at the the … is near the german, maybe a little more safety.

i had been to switzerland 3 times because i visited the international schools in the switzerland area. All of the schools are international but the reason i chose this school is it is near germany, they normally use german. i should let her to learn german because i want her to get into the german university and the school location is at … which is near germany, so maybe it is a little safer.

Grammar

choose / chose / chosen

i have done sth 3 times – no FOR
i have class for 1 hour
I can do / I should do / I must do / I will do

the = ONLY use when need to be more specific

i will do / i am going to 

my daughters is in Switzerland where she really likes studying.

Mr Matubara

Good morning.

I sent a package to you yesterday by OCS NO: 212-313-414
Included was / Enclosed was:
a) Some colour cards for revision Rose-pink and Off-white . Please check it and give me your suggestion.
b) Some laces samples which if would be able to select one from and let me know, that would be great. / Some laces samples. Please select one and let me know your decision. Based on your selection, I’m going to arrange to start formal production.
c) The last style revised sample ,size #70, Rose-pink and Off-white, one piece per colour.

Best wishes

Lisun

Mr Matubara

Good morning.

I am writing to you to advise that (formal) / I just wanted to send you an email letting you know that (casual) a package was shipped to you yesterday by OCS with a tracking number of NO: 212-313-414

For your reference, the enclosed items include:
a) Some colour cards for revision Rose-pink and Off-white. If you would be able to provide your preference after reviewing the 6 enclosed color cards, that would be very helpful. 
b) Some laces samples. Would you be able to select one of these samples? Based on your selection, I’m going to arrange to start formal production.
c) The last style revised sample ,size #70, Rose-pink and Off-white, one piece per colour.

Regards / Best regards / Warm regards / Sincerely,

Lisun

The last style of the revised sample has been enclosed. The size is 70, and the colors are Rose-pink and Off-white. We have provided one piece for each colour.

Latest style revised sample. Size: 70, colors: Rose-pink & Off-white. One piece per colour.