VIP Class Notes (Jesse) [W]

Try to write another email acting like you’re writing to one of your clients / colleagues about a real situation at work. Keep it polite but still direct and try to use the words from today + however / also / as at the start of some sentences and check the conjunctions before you send it.

Hi David,

I’m glad to receive your email. There is something which we need to discuss together on the list：
1. Recording to the plan, the packing design would be done at 4th this month, If you could please conform that if it has already be finished, so I can update the planing form.
2. From what I know, you expect to push the product to the market at the end of this moth, however the production would be finished at 6th next month, please be aware of the schedule.
As above，could you please let me know what time we can discuss with each other. I’m appreciate your cooperation.

Hi David,

I’m glad to receive your email. There is something which we need to discuss together on the list：
1. According to the plan, the packing design will be done on the 4th of this month, so if you could please confirm that if it has already been finished, so I can update the planning form.
2. From what I know, you expect to push the product to the market at the end of this month, however the production will be finished on the 6th of next month, so please be aware of the schedule.
As above，could you please let me know what time we can discuss with each other. I appreciate your cooperation.

Vocabulary

discuss = higher level than talk so it’s more efficient
eg. we need to talk about this project = we need to discuss this project

we went to the park together = maybe we went together, maybe not

I record my class = lu ying
eg. I listened to a recording

information = xin xi
inform = tell information (tell)
eg. please inform me what time the meeting is tomorrow

advise (v)
advice (n)
advertise (v)
advertisement (n)

note (n)
notice (v)
notify (v)
notification (n)

Grammar

would = if + will
could = if + can

it is the 5th of June 2020
it is June 5th 2020

at point
on day
in period / month / year

there was a people – there is someone / there is a person