VIP Class Notes (Jesse) [W]

Homework

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Supermarkets should only sell food produced from within their own country rather than imports from overseas.

What are your opinions on this?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

Focus: think about plurals (+s or not?) and that / what / which. Make sure every idea in your sentence has a conjunction to connect logic. 

Vocabulary

supervise – to watch carefully
eg. I need to go to the office to supervise the AC people

i’m not suit for the position – I’m not suitable for it

sea-change – a huge life change
eg. i’m ready for a sea-change

that (to describe nouns) = just to add detail to help me know “which one?”
eg. the cup that is white, is mine, but the cup that is black is yours.

which = to add detail to describe sth
eg. I have a phone which I bought in Japan.
eg2. I bought a phone which is really popular in Asia.

what – replaces the noun – can be anything
eg. I know what you want = I know the drink you want / I know the action you want

Grammar

Starbucks sells cups – because it’s maybe more than 1
I have zero cups – because it’s 0 we use “s”
I have a cup – no “s” because definitely only 1

Writing exercise

Write about your opinion on Wanghong and the new idea of beauty and how the new “KOL” business model is changing/shaping the way we make purchases and spend our free time. IYO, is this a good development?
– Connection between every paragraph (connecting words as well as ideas.)
– Keep up the good work on logic and ideas
– SVO (remember your VERB)
– Thesis – make it clear
– If you use a metaphor, spell it out in the next sentence.

Wanghong or KOL business is booming in China. Fast fashion industries hire famous Wanghong to have a live streaming with their brands . They also support their brands to them , in order to increase consumption
Especially during the pandemic people can’t go out to buy daily products. People watched live streaming of KOL and ordered the products which they need. Sometimes the price is lower than physical shop or flagship store. KOL help to brisk up the fast fashion market with small budgets. If the brands market use a professional KOL to advertise their brands , I think they will get a high synergy effect.
Due to the booming of Wanghong business lots of young people want to be Wanghong or KOL aimlessly. Young people just to make much more money easier than other people or want to be famous via live streaming.
Final thoughts, the KOL business is a good development in this rapid century which we live. Although to be a KOL should be professional about the brands what you lead. You shouldn’t cause a damage to the reputation of the brands.

Wanghong or KOL business is booming in China. Fast fashion industries hire famous Wanghong / internet celebrity to have live streams with their brands, which also support their brands in order to increase consumption.
Especially during the pandemic when people can’t go out to buy daily products, people are watching live streams of KOLs and ordering the products which / that they need. Sometimes the price is lower than physical shops or flagship stores. KOLs help to brisk up / boost the fast fashion market with a small investment / at a low cost. If the brands marketing people use a professional KOL to advertise their brands , I think they will get a high synergistic effect.
Due to the booming of the Wanghong business lots of young people want to be Wanghong or KOLs as they believe it’s a way to get rich quick easier than other people or want to be famous via live streaming.
To sum up / As my final thoughts, I feel that, the KOL business is a positive addition in this rapidly developing time in which we live. Although to be a KOL, you should be professional about the brands that you lead. You shouldn’t cause a damage to the reputation of the brands.