VIP Class Notes (Jesse) [W]

Writing exercise

My wedding day was in 2017 that was a summer day. Before that I had been on a diet to lose weight for one month in order to take my wedding dress better. We invited our relatives to and friends attend the wedding. I got up at 5 am and got cosmetic. My husband came to my home and took me to the wedding place that was decorated very well. The most interesting was that my husband must to dance and finished the tasks that were my friends gave. And then we went over the ceremony that we took the oath with each other, and all guests ate and drank together.I was very happy and moved even though a little tired.

My wedding day was in 2017 which was a summer day. Before that I had been on a diet to lose weight for one month in order to wear my wedding dress better / in order for my wedding dress to fit better. We invited our relatives and friends to attend the wedding. I got up at 5 am and got my makeup done. My husband came to my home and took me to the wedding place which was decorated very well. The most interesting thing was that my husband must to / needed to / had to dance and finished the tasks that were my friends gave (him). And then we had the ceremony where we said our vows to each other, and all guests ate and drank / had a meal and drinks together. I was very happy and moved even though I was a little tired / moved, though a little tired.

Vocabulary

go over / go through = discuss / talk about / practice to prepare
eg. let’s go over the meeting notes from yesterday
eg2. I just had a call with the investor, maybe we could go through the details

I’ve been through many things in my life / I went through the ceremony with my husband

I have a coffee that / which I bought here.

cosmetics / makeup
beverage / drink
cuisine (or something) / food

which – mostly adds new detail / unknown detail

I lost my first baby – not clear if it was born yet, maybe it died after birth

miscarried – you didn’t carry the baby to term / you didn’t give birth

scaleable – able to be “scaled” – make the company bigger by replicating / duplicating / multiplying – making more of the same based on a model
eg. SE is very scaleable because the processes are really well organised

Grammar

must do 
need to do
have to do
should do 
could do 
can do 

Reading

There was something wrong with his leg. It burned. But it burned in one spot only. He didn’t know what was wrong. The spot was smaller than a dime. It was on the back of his leg. He picked up a hand mirror. He used the hand mirror to look at the back of his leg. He saw a small lump.