VIP Class Notes (Jesse) [W]

do another writing and compare it to your last writing – remember each verb needs a subject, 2 verbs use “to” in the middle, use simple words that kids would use – don’t be too specific.

What problems have I had with my teeth?
I will tell you a part about my life.
Much of my life, principally when was young I lived at countryside, my family was farmers and therefore they didn’t idea how take care their teeth, just if you had a big problem with these. So, I didn’t take care of my teeth, and I had to go to the dentist because I needed him to fix me some cavities and fillings those. I remember that those fillings than him put on my molars was easily abraded. Years after a member of my sister´s family did something in my teeth again for to fix the previous damaged, I believed in him because he was a member of my family, but time later I realized that man too did bad work in my mouth, him put some fillings on over some cavities. When I was working age, I went to a professional dentist, ten years after, all equipment were getting better, and him fix all, after that I try take good care of my teeth lot. but i had another experience was when I back to dentist (wasn’t same) because I wanted cleaning my teeth in that time, that day the dentist wasn’t there and the assistant who also worked in the reception, attended me and did cleaning on my teeth but also she did some injuries in the walls of my mouth, when I got back home almost cried, just of think that girl not only because she removed my plaque if not a lot of enamel. Who do this work in this way isn’t a good person because cheat you

What problems have I had with my teeth?
I will tell you a part about my life.
Much of my life, when was young I mostly / mainly lived at countryside, my family was farmers and therefore they didn’t have any idea how to take care of their teeth, just if they had a big problem with them. So, I didn’t take care of my teeth, and I had to go to the dentist because I needed him to fix some of my cavities and give me fillings / fix some cavities of mine / fill some cavities of mine. I remember that those fillings that he put on my molars were easy to wear down / away. Years after, a member of my sister´s family did something in my teeth again to fix the previous damage, I believed in him because he was a member of my family, but later / after some time I realized that man also did bad work in my mouth, because he put some fillings on over some cavities. When I was working age, I went to a professional dentist, ten years after, all the equipment / technology was getting better, and he fixed all of my problems / fixed everything, and after that I try to take very good care of my teeth. But i had another experience was when I went back to the dentist (wasn’t same) because I wanted to clean my teeth at that time. That day the dentist wasn’t there and the assistant who also worked in the reception, attended me / took care of me / worked on me and she did the cleaning on my teeth but also she caused some injuries in the walls of my mouth. When I got back home, I almost cried, just thinking of that girl not only because she removed my plaque but also a lot of enamel. Who does this work in this way isn’t a good person because they cheat you.

Grammar

not only do I like you but also I want to help you

I / me
you / you
he / him
she / her
we / us
they / them
it / it

I like him
he likes me
I like her
she likes me
they like us 
we like them 
I like it
it likes me

there is some damage to my teeth – noun
i damaged my teeth / if I damage my teeth, they hurt – verbs

I come here to learn English
I come here for English

I speak English / I don’t speak English

I don’t have any money

Do you know about China? / Do you have any idea about China?